On Wed, 24 Sep 2014 01:15:35 -0400 omd <[email protected]> wrote: > ID: 7693 > Title: Revised Province of Agora > Author: aranea > Co-author(s): Warrigal > Adoption Index: 1.1 > > [snip] > > These summaries MAY be anything whatsoever (subject to other > rules), but they SHOULD follow common sense, precedent, and Agoran > consensus. Provided they don't describe any entities not belonging > to the PoA, such summaries inside a Dungeon Master's report are > self-ratifying. > > The Dungeon Master CAN by Announcement cause this rule to add or > remove entities to/from the PoA or set properties of entities > pertaining to the PoA, unless rules to the contrary exist.
I'd still like to get this in. I think only two changes are neccessary: 1) "Provided they don't describe any entities not belonging to the PoA," ---> "Provided they don't describe any entities not belonging exclusively to the PoA," 2) "or set properties of entities pertaining to the PoA" ---> "or set properties of entities pertaining exclusively to the PoA" (both in the two cited paragraphs) What do you think? -- Luis Ressel <[email protected]> GPG fpr: F08D 2AF6 655E 25DE 52BC E53D 08F5 7F90 3029 B5BD
