On Sat, 9 Sep 2017, Owen Jacobson wrote:

   {{{
       In a timely fashion after the start of June 1 of each year, the
       Herald SHALL propose a set of Regulations governing a Birthday
       Tournament for that year; the Herald CAN also delegate the
       responsibility for creating or running the tournament to
       another player, with that player's consent, by announcement.
   }}}

Misses the initial SHALL (it is clear from the rest of the rule that it's not speaking about making a Proposal).

   Amend rule 1607 ("Distribution") by replacing the third paragraph
   with:

   {{{
       The Promotor CAN distribute a proposal which is in the Proposal
       Pool at any time, by announcement. The Promotor SHALL NOT
       distribute proposals which are not pending.
   }}}

I don't think this one is needed, because the definition of distribution resolves to an Agoran decision initiation, described as a publishing action elsewhere. In fact adding "by announcement" might do more harm than good.

Greetings,
Ørjan.

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