On Sun, Jun 25, 2023 at 12:12 AM 4st nomic via agora-business < agora-busin...@agoranomic.org> wrote:
> The thesis can be found here: > > https://mailman.agoranomic.org/cgi-bin/mailman/private/agora-business/2023-June/051673.html > Thanks to Juan and Snail for the feedback! These are the changes I have planned to the thesis. (Anyone is welcome to peer review this, although I expect nothing!) Changes: - Moved Sources to the end (snail, juan) TODO LIST: - As Herald, reassign a third peer reviewer upon resubmission (Per random selection from (Janet, G) , this is planned to be G., unless a volunteer approacheth.) (4st) - Added stronger support from classification to mechanic (snail) - Added reasoning behind splitting the mechanics as such, and the reasons for including said mechanics in the first place. (snail) - Apparently, added examples on what these findings can be used for. (snail) - Provided more detailed summaries of sources (juan) - Provided a literature review (juan) - In the literature review, added pertinent details of concepts used (juan) - Revamped Introduction and Moving Forward (snail, juan) - Added pertinence and clarifying what this thesis does not do (juan) - Added an unofficial preface on top of the introduction b/c my feelings on theses (4st) - Added an unofficial section on suggestions (juan) b/c suggestions can still be controversial, and I do not want to taint the official portion of the thesis thereof. Other responses to Peer Review - (snail) Polls don't feel like an option, as we don't have many players, additionally, that assumes familiarity with the categorical schemas being applied. So, hopefully I can get specific disagreement and recategorization as a response to this thesis, especially after I clarify and summarize in a proper literature review. - (juan) Uh, with the amount of other work I did/doing, and didn't do, I may have missed/will miss some specific details you wanted me to work on er, oops in advance. Some of them are small writing issues that I am going to try to keep in mind, but otherwise it will just go to "revise" again and should be just a short skip-and-a-jump from there this time around. -- 4ˢᵗ Deputy Herald and Deputy Prime Minister Uncertified Bad Idea Generator
