Reviewer: Barry Leiba Review result: Ready First: My apologies for the long delay in getting this follow-up review done!
Second: Thanks for all the work on this document. It's much improved from the -03 version and addresses all my concerns well. Just one small comment in Section 5.1: When using CMP, adherence to the LCMPP [I-D.ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile] is mandatory. In particular, the following specific requirements apply (cf. Figure 2). Should “mandatory” be the BCP 14 “REQUIRED” ? Your choice, as it can stand the way it is, but I have a minor preference for the BCP 14 version. And in Section 8, “Barry Lea” is supposed to be me, I think: “Barry Leiba”. :-) _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list Anima@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
