On Tue, Dec 05, 2023 at 01:05:42PM -0500, Michael Richardson wrote: > > > Earlier this year, i did a review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-05: > > https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/anima/fxFBwoUUUc31eHUcDhdTmWdkFdk > > I see that email refers to your review, but it is not the review itself.
Review is attachment of that email. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/anima/fxFBwoUUUc31eHUcDhdTmWdkFdk/2/ Cheers Toerless > > The acknowledgemeent section of -08 does not mention my name. There is > no > > changelog in the document explaining whether or not my review was taking > > into account. I tried to look through the github closed issues, but > > could not figure out > > I will locate your previous review and work on it, as well as your comments > below. > > > Below, i am not repeating what i wrote for the -05 review, which i > think was > > often editorial to improve text quality. Instead, i'll try below to > raise > > mostly functional issues in the core spec. Feel free to also go back to > the -05 review > > and check if stuff from there is still relevant. > > okay, thank for this. > > > -- > Michael Richardson <[email protected]> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) > Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide > > > > -- --- [email protected] _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
