Dear all,
I've just submitted draft version 12 of BRSKI-AE
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae/12/>addressing
the nits reported in the recent Gen-ART review
and providing some fixups on the changes of version 11.
Here is the summary of changes for the previous two versions:
• In response to AD review by Mahesh Jethanandani:
o rearrange few paragraphs in abstract, introduction, and appendix
oreplace most occurrences of 'Note:' by 'Note that' or the like
oconvert some words to normative language, e.g., replacing 'may' by 'MAY’
ochange re-use of TLS channel by enrollment protectionfrom RECOMMENDED
to MANDATORY
ofix ambiguities and hard-to-read sentences by re-phrasing them
omake wording more consistent, fix (mostly grammar) nits
•Fix nits spotted in Gen-ART review by Meral Shirazipour
At IETF 120, the status of the draft (currently: Waiting for AD
Go-Ahead) is going go be presented by Steffen.
Best,
David
On 05.07.24 18:23, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote:
A new version of Internet-Draft draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-12.txt has been
successfully submitted by David von Oheimb and posted to the
IETF repository.
Name: draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae
Revision: 12
Title: BRSKI-AE: Alternative Enrollment Protocols in BRSKI
Date: 2024-07-05
Group: anima
Pages: 41
URL:https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-12.txt
Status:https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae/
HTMLized:https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae
Diff:https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-12
Abstract:
This document defines an enhancement of Bootstrapping Remote Secure
Key Infrastructure (BRSKI, RFC 8995). It supports alternative
certificate enrollment protocols, such as CMP, that use authenticated
self-contained signed objects for certification messages.
About This Document
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Status information for this document may be found at
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae/.
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https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-ae.
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