Reviewer: Jim Fenton Review result: Ready with Nits I am the designated artart reviewer for this draft.
Thanks for addressing all of my comments on -12. They are all addressed in the text with the exception of my question on why this is separate from ietf-anima-rfc3866bis, which was answered on the mailing list. This draft is ready to go with the exception of a few tiny editorial nits: Section 1, paragraph 1 move (BRSKI) and (SZTP) inside the quotes since that is part of the titles of the RFCs. Section 1, paragraph 3 "as enhancement of" -> "as an enhancement of" Section 2, definition of voucher: "statement from Manufacturer" -> "statement from a Manufacturer" Section 2, definition of MASA: manufacturer's -> manufacturers' _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
