My thanks to Esko for taking over the stick-handling and moving this document
forward.

> (not yet specified in this document)

This text implies that it might be specified in *this* document.
Maybe remove "yet"?
Maybe move your name to the top of the authors list, and mark yourself as 
editor?
Maybe remove your name from Acknowledgements.

I am slightly concerned that some reviewers will want a definition of
"circuit proxy".
A very very very long time ago (1996?) I wrote an I-D about different proxy 
types. I
wish it had gotten published.  So long ago, it seems not to be anywhere I can 
find.
It seems wikipedia has:
  https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Circuit-level_gateway
and a number of firewall vendors speak about it, so maybe the term didn't
die.

--
Michael Richardson <[email protected]>   . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting )
           Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide




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