Gunter Van de Velde via Datatracker <[email protected]> wrote:
    > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
    > COMMENT:
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    > # Gunter Van de Velde, RTG AD, comments for
    > draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-16

    > # The line numbers used are rendered from IETF idnits tool:
    > 
https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-16.txt

    > # nice writeup and well written. Thanks for the great work

    > # Detailed Review # ===============

    > 163 1.1.  Terminology

    GV> Many goodies in this section. I see "Owner Domain" and "Owner
    GV> registrar"
    > but no definition of "Owner" or "Owner delegate"

    > Many thanks for this document, Gunter Van de Velde, Routing AD

I added two definitions that will help, I hope:
https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/pull/247
I will leave this PR open/unmerged to collect IESG review comments/edits.

I just posted -16 before this, which reacts to Tim Wicinski's DNSDIR
re-review, and it does not include the above.

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Michael Richardson <[email protected]>   . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting )
           Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide

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