Esko Dijk <[email protected]> wrote:
    > I've reviewed draft-ietf-anima-rfc8366bis-14 as part of the WGLC; with
    > issues/questions listed below and some editorial updates proposed in a PR.
    > (See: https://github.com/anima-wg/voucher/pull/85)

Thank you.
I've been fighting PYANG things for a few hours (DAYS?!), and I've run out of
time now.  So I'm posting -16 with updates that I have.  More details later.

    > *** Section 7.4

    > Some items have 2 SIDs assigned: additional-configuration-url, est-domain,
    > expires-on.

Yes, this is the thing I'm fighting.

    > *** Section 7.5

    > "In JSON serialization, these extensions require a unique name, and this 
MUST
    > be allocated by IANA. The name MUST be the same as the YANG module name. "
    -> this is unclear to me. If every extension has the same name, it's not
    > unique and not useful.

    > *** Section 8.1
    > Again like in 7.1, why are some items/leaves outside of the "voucher"
    > element?

Yes. ARGH.

    > In the YANG, the name of RFC XXXX differs from the actual name - same 
thing
    > as in 7.3.

The RPC will s/XXXX/1234/ when they assign the number.

I got as far as:

    > The boilerplate BCP text is included twice in the same field:

Sorry.

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Michael Richardson <[email protected]>   . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting )
           Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide




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