Dan, Thank you for moving this discussion to the next step by providing excellent draft policy proposal text (and providing a redlined PDF). I support this draft text. I have two comments for your consideration:
1) Since we're cleaning up NRPM, let's remove section "4.2.2 Annual Renewal". This text does not help answer the question, "Do I qualify for number resources from ARIN?" and is already sufficiently covered by the RSA text. 2) The SWIP section (4.2.8.7.1 Reassignment Information): the way the new text is written, it seems to me that if $ENTERPRISE assigns a /28 to a $PURPOSE, that has to be SWIPed. Would the text be improved if the opening sentence read, "Each IPv4 assignment to an external customer" or somesuch? With regards, David _______________________________________________ PPML You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: http://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues.
