+3 Bill’s edits below. On Thu, Jul 29, 2021 at 23:02 Mattapally Technologies < technologiesmattapa...@gmail.com> wrote:
> +2 Bill’s suggested edits below > > On Thursday, July 29, 2021, Brian Jones <bjo...@vt.edu> wrote: > >> +1 Bill’s suggested edits below. >> >> >> > On Jul 28, 2021, at 3:43 PM, William Herrin <b...@herrin.us> wrote: >> > >> > On Tue, Jul 27, 2021 at 9:56 AM ARIN <i...@arin.net> wrote: >> >> In Section 8.3.: >> >> >> >> Under “Conditions on source of the transfer,” replace “Number >> resources received as the result of an 8.2 transfer are out of scope for >> the purposes of this restriction” with “This restriction does not include >> 8.2 transfers.” >> > >> > Howdy, >> > >> > They both seem about the same to me. The replacement is less clumsy >> > than the original but still clumsy. Just throwing out some >> > wordsmithing here: >> > >> > Current; >> > >> > The source entity must not have received a transfer, allocation, or >> > assignment of IPv4 number resources from ARIN for the 12 months prior >> > to the approval of a transfer request. Number resources received as >> > the result of an 8.2 transfer are out of scope for the purposes of >> > this restriction. >> > >> > Suggested: >> > >> > Excluding section 8.2 transfers, the source entity must not have >> > received a transfer, allocation, or assignment of IPv4 number >> > resources from ARIN during the 12 months prior to the approval of a >> > transfer request. >> > >> > That seems to me to flow better. >> > >> > Regards, >> > Bill Herrin >> > >> > >> > -- >> > William Herrin >> > b...@herrin.us >> > https://bill.herrin.us/ >> > _______________________________________________ >> > ARIN-PPML >> > You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to >> > the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List (ARIN-PPML@arin.net). >> > Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: >> > https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml >> > Please contact i...@arin.net if you experience any issues. >> >> Brian Jones >> bjo...@vt.edu >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ > ARIN-PPML > You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to > the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List (ARIN-PPML@arin.net). > Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: > https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml > Please contact i...@arin.net if you experience any issues. > -- Sent from Gmail Mobile
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