I support this editorial change. On Thu, Aug 19, 2021 at 10:49 AM Brian Jones <[email protected]> wrote:
> This editorial change makes the NRPM cleaner and easier to read and > understand. I support this change. > > > On Aug 18, 2021, at 4:59 PM, ARIN <[email protected]> wrote: > > The following Editorial Change has been revised: > > * ARIN-edit-2020-9: Section 8 Editorial Clean-up > > Revised text is below and can be found at: > > https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2020_9/ > > The process for Editorial Changes is found in Part One, Section 3.1, > paragraph 3 of the Policy Development Process (PDP): > > "Changes to policy that are purely editorial and non-substantial in nature > are outside the scope of the full Policy Development Process and may only > be made with 30 days public notice followed by the concurrence of both the > ARIN Advisory Council and ARIN Board of Trustees that the changes are > non-substantial in nature." > > Your feedback on this Editorial Change is encouraged as the community > review period continues. This review period will close on 26 August 2021. > > The PDP can be found at: > > https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/ > > Draft Policies and Proposals under discussion can be found at: > > https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ > > Regards, > > Sean Hopkins > Senior Policy Analyst > American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN) > > > > Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2020-9: Section 8 Editorial Clean-up > > Problem Statement: > > ARIN staff have identified some areas of potential NRPM editorial > clean-up. Building on those recommendations the ARIN AC NRPM Clean-up > Working Group undertook an editorial review of the NRPM. > > The focus of the review was to clarify and simplify language, employ > consistent and more up to date terminology throughout and renumber the > sections after removing section numbers that were no longer being utilized. > The changes resulting from this review were captured in ARIN-edit-2020-9, > proposed in September 2020. > > The portions of ARIN-edit-2020-9 relating to Sections 8.3 and 8.4 of the > NRPM are presented in this editorial change for community consideration. > The remaining portions will be presented separately. > > Policy Statement: > > In Section 8.3.: > > Under "Conditions on source of the transfer," replace "The source entity > must not have received a transfer, allocation, or assignment of IPv4 number > resources from ARIN for the 12 months prior to the approval of a transfer > request. Number resources received as the result of an 8.2 transfer are out > of scope for the purposes of this restriction." with "Excluding section 8.2 > transfers, the source entity must not have received a transfer, allocation, > or assignment of IPv4 number resources from ARIN during the 12 months prior > to the approval of a transfer request." > > In Section 8.4.: > > Under "Conditions on source of the transfer," replace "Number resources > received as the result of an 8.2 transfer are out of scope for the purposes > of this restriction" with "This restriction does not include 8.2 > transfers." > > Timetable for Implementation: Immediate > > > > > _______________________________________________ > ARIN-PPML > You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to > the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). > Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: > https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml > Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues. > > > Brian Jones > [email protected] > > > > _______________________________________________ > ARIN-PPML > You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to > the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). > Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: > https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml > Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues. >
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