| 6.2 Extensions To the Atom Vocabulary
| Unlike markup from other vocabularies, foreign markup from the Atom | vocabulary MAY appear at any location in an Atom document.
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| 6.4 Extension Elements
| | Atom allows foreign markup anywhere in an Atom document.
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| 4.1.2 The "atom:entry" Element
| | The atom:entry element MAY contain any namespace-qualified
| [W3C.REC-xml-names-19990114] elements as children.
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6.4 Extension Elements
Child elements of atom:entry and atom:feed are considered "metadata" elements, and are described below.
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Child elements of atom:entry, atom:feed, and Person constructs are considered "metadata" elements, and are described below.
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