* James Aylett <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> [2005-04-10 11:55]:
> On Sat, Apr 09, 2005 at 11:06:00PM -0400, Robert Sayre wrote:
> > * the atom:entry contains an atom:content that has a "src"
> >   attribute (and is thus empty).
> 
> FWIW, for clarity I would favour:
> 
> '... has a "src" attribute (and is thus itself empty).'
> 
> The 'itself' I feel allows the 'empty' assertion to govern
> atom:content, not the src attribute, without ambiguity.

To me that actually sounds even more ambiguous. I suggest simply
omitting the parentheses, which would seem to let the âandâ more
clearly qualify the âthat,â to my mind.

Regards,
-- 
Aristotle

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