On 17/09/2025 04:52, C. M. Heard wrote:
Greetings,

Joe and I have discussed the questions posed by the RFC Editor team; our responses are in-line below.

Note that neither of us has done a full review of all of the document content, and we still need to do that before we clear the document for publication. We leave it to the discretion of the RFC Editor team whether to make updated review products with the changes below before we do the full content review, or whether it is better for us to do the full content review now and provide a second list of changes. _Please let us know._

>> GORRY, please note the question below directed to you concerning the stability of the proposed URL for [Zu20].

Alanna and Sandy please see below.
Mike Heard
(speaking for both Joe and myself)

On Thu, Sep 11, 2025 at 9:57 AM <[email protected]> wrote:

    Authors,

    While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as
    necessary)
    the following questions, which are also in the source file.

    1) <!-- [rfced] Mike, we note that your name appears as follows in the
    Authors' Addresses section:
       C. M. (Mike) Heard (editor)

Is this how you prefer that it be displayed going forward?

Yes please.

    In your earlier RFCs, it has appeared as follows:
       C. M. Heard

    In addition, we note that RFC 3637 displayed "C. M. Heard" in the
    document
    header, while RFCs 3638 and 4181 used "C. Heard".  Please let us
    know you
    preference, and we will use that in this document and any future RFCs.
    -->


Let's use C. Heard in the document header. That will match RFCs 3638, 4181, and 4841.

    2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that
    appear in
    the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->


We believe that the title has all the keywords that are needed.

    3) <!--[rfced] Text that is preceded with ">>" is not indented.
    Would you
    like each instance to be indented, or may we update this text as
    follows?

    Original:
       In this document, the characters ">>" preceding an indented line(s)
       indicates a statement using the key words listed above.

    Perhaps:
       In this document, the characters ">>" preceding text
       indicate a statement using the key words listed above.
    -->


Since these always occur at the start of a paragraph, we prefer:
   In this document, the characters ">>" at the beginning of a
   paragraph indicate a statement using the key words listed above.

    4) <!-- [rfced] Informative reference RFC 793 has been obsoleted
    by RFC
    9293.  We recommend replacing RFC 793 with RFC 9293. However, if
    RFC 793
    must be referenced, we suggest mentioning RFC 9293 (e.g., "most widely
    known from TCP [RFC793], which has been obsoleted by [RFC9293]").  See
    Section 4.8.6 of RFC 7322  ("RFC Style Guide").

    Original:
       o  Socket pair - a pair of sockets defining a UDP exchange, defined
          by a remote socket and a local socket, each composed of an IP
          address and UDP port number (most widely known from TCP
    [RFC793])
    -->


We agree. The new text should be:

o  Socket pair – a pair of sockets defining a UDP exchange, defined

   by a remote socket and a local socket, each composed of an IP

   address and UDP port number (most widely known from TCP [RFC793],

   which has been obsoleted by [RFC9293])


    5) <!--[rfced] We are having some difficulty understanding the
    intention
    of "to ignore" in the sentence below. Should all UDP options that a
    receiver does not recognize be ignored?  Please review and let us
    know how
    this sentence may be clarified.

    Original:
       o  UNSAFE options - UDP options that are not designed to be
    safe for
          a receiver that does not understand them to ignore.
    -->


We propose:

o  UNSAFE options – UDP options that are not designed to be safely

  ignored by a receiver that does not understand them.

    6) <!--[rfced] To avoid use of "required" and "require" in the same
    sentence to improve readability, may we update "require" with "need"?

    Original:
       Internet historians have suggested a number of possible
       reasons why the design of UDP includes this field, e.g., to support
       multiple UDP packets within the same IP datagram or to indicate the
       length of the UDP user data as distinct from zero padding required
       for systems that require writes that are not byte-aligned.

    Perhaps:
       Internet historians have suggested a number of possible
       reasons why the design of UDP includes this field, e.g., to support
       multiple UDP packets within the same IP datagram or to indicate the
       length of the UDP user data as distinct from zero padding required
       for systems that need writes that are not byte-aligned.
    -->


We would prefer:

Internet historians have suggested a number of possible reasons why the design of UDP includes this field, e.g., to support multiple UDP packets within the same IP datagram or to indicate the length of the UDP user data as distinct from zero padding required for systems that cannot write an arbitrary number of bytes of data.


    7) <!--[rfced] We are having difficulty parsing the second
    sentence below.
    In particular, the meaning of "in the absence of these extensions" is
    unclear. Please review and let us know how this text may be
    updated for
    clarity.

    Original:
       UDP options have been designed based on the following core
       principles. Each is an observation about (preexisting) UDP [RFC768]
       in the absence of these extensions that this document does not
       intend to change or a lesson learned from other protocol designs.

    Perhaps:
       UDP options have been designed based on the following core
       principles. Each is an (preexisting) observation about UDP [RFC768]
       that this document does not intend to change or is a lesson learned
       from other protocol designs.
    -->


We would prefer:

UDP options have been designed based on the following core principles. Each is an observation about preexisting behavior of UDP [RFC768] in the absence of these extensions that this document does not intend to change or a lesson learned from other protocol designs.

    8) <!--[rfced] In the Meaning column of Table 1, should "UCMP",
    "UENC",
    and "UEXP" be updated to include "UNSAFE" to reflect their
    expansions in
    Sections 12.1, 12.2, and 12.3, respectively?

    Original:
       RESERVED for Compression (UCMP)
       ...
       RESERVED for Encryption (UENC)
       ...
       RFC 3692-style experiments (UEXP)

    Perhaps:
       RESERVED for UNSAFE Compression (UCMP)
       ...
       RESERVED for UNSAFE Encryption (UENC)
       ...
       RFC 3692-style UNSAFE experiments (UEXP)

    Note that "RFC 3692-style" has been updated to "RFC3692-style" (no
    space)
    to match use in other RFCs.  We also updated some capitalization
    in the
    meaning column.  If there are no objections, we will ask IANA to
    update
    their registry accordingly.
    -->


We agree with this suggestion.

    9) <!-- [rfced] The "UDP Option Kind Numbers" registry does not
    include
    the asterisks that appear in Table 1 (see
    https://www.iana.org/assignments/udp/udp.xhtml#udp-options). We
    believe this is an expected
    difference between what appears in the RFC and the IANA registry,
    as the
    asterisks are defined in the RFC and the IANA registry has a
    comparable
    note about values 0-7.  Please confirm that this is correct.
    -->


Yes, this is correct.

    10) <!--[rfced] Should "MUST be" also apply to "user data received
    sent to
    the user"?

    Original:
       If the
       user data is not empty, all UDP options MUST be silently
    ignored and
       the user data received sent to the user.

    Perhaps:
       If the
       user data is not empty, all UDP options MUST be silently
    ignored and
       the user data received MUST be sent to the user.
    -->


We agree with this change.

    11) <!--[rfced] As "RES" means "Response", should "RES response" be
    updated to "RES option"?

    Original:
       For example, an application needs to explicitly enable the
    generation
       of a RES response by DPLPMTUD when using UDP Options [Fa25].

    Perhaps:
       For example, an application needs to explicitly enable the
    generation
       of a RES option by DPLPMTUD when using UDP Options [Fa25].
    -->


We agree with this change.

    12) <!--[rfced] Should "UKind" be updated to simply be "Kind"? "UKind"
    does not appear to be defined in this document.

    Original:
       >> Receivers supporting UDP options MUST silently drop the UDP user
       data of the reassembled datagram if any fragment or the entire
       datagram includes an UNSAFE option whose UKind is not supported or
       if an UNSAFE option appears outside the context of a fragment or
       reassembled fragments.
    -->


We agree with this change. "UKind" is a leftover from a previous approach ☹️

    13) <!--[rfced] To avoid repetition of "except" and "excepting" in the
    same sentence to improve readability, may be update "excepting" to
    "besides"?

    Original:
       >> At the sender, new options MUST NOT modify UDP packet content
       anywhere except within their option field, excepting only those
       contained within the UNSAFE option...

    Perhaps:
       >> At the sender, new options MUST NOT modify UDP packet content
       anywhere except within their option field, besides only those
       contained within the UNSAFE option...
    -->


We would prefer:

>> At the sender, new options MUST NOT modify UDP packet content anywhere outside their option field, excepting only those contained within the UNSAFE option; areas that need to remain unmodified include the IP header, IP options, the UDP user data, and the surplus area (i.e., other options).


    14) <!--[rfced] As "RECOMMENDS" is not a 2119/8174 keyword, may we
    rephrase this sentence to use "RECOMMENDED"?

    Original:
       This document RECOMMENDS that options be
       useful per-fragment and also RECOMMENDS that options used per-
       fragment be reported to the user as a finite aggregate (e.g., a
    sum,
       a flag, etc.) rather than individually.

    Perhaps B:
       It is RECOMMENDED that options be
       useful per-fragment; it is also RECOMMENDED that options used per-
       fragment be reported to the user as a finite aggregate (e.g., a
    sum,
       a flag, etc.) rather than individually.
    -->


We are OK with the proposed change.

    15) <!--[rfced] For clarity, may we update "certain" with "some"?

    Original:
       Note that only certain of the initially defined options violate
       these rules:

    Perhaps:
       Note that only some of the initially defined options violate
       these rules:
    -->


Given the context of the paragraph that follows, we would prefer:

With one exception, UNSAFE options are used when UDP user data needs to be modified:


    16) <!--[rfced] To avoid awkward hyphenation, may we rephrase
    "non-'must-support' options" as follows?

    Original:
       >> Non-"must-support" options MAY be ignored by receivers, if
       present, e.g., based on API settings.

    Perhaps:
       >> Options that are not must-support options MAY be ignored by
       receivers, if present, e.g., based on API settings.
    -->


We would prefer:

>> Options that are not “must-support” options MAY, if present, be ignored by receivers, based, e.g., on API settings.


    17) <!--[rfced] FYI - To improve readability, we have rephrased this
    sentence and added quotes. Please review and let us know of any
    objections.

    Original:
       UDP options are no exception and here are
       specified as MUST NOT be altered in transit.

    Current:
       UDP options are no exception and are
       specified here as "MUST NOT be altered in transit".
    -->


We agree with this change.

    18) <!--[rfced] Would you like to add a citation for the claimed
    report
    below? If so, please provide us with the reference information.

    Additionally, may we change the first instance of "reported" to
    avoid "has
    been reported ... to be reported"?  Perhaps "has been noted"?

    Original:
       It has been reported that Alcatel-Lucent's "Brick" Intrusion
       Detection System has a default configuration that interprets
       inconsistencies between UDP Length and IP Length as an attack to be
       reported.  Note that other firewall systems, e.g., CheckPoint,
    use a
       default "relaxed UDP length verification" to avoid falsely
       interpreting this inconsistency as an attack.
    -->


We are OK with the proposed change. Unfortunately, we do not have a citation.

    19) <!--[rfced] May we update "non-aware" to "unaware"?

    Original:
       Some of the mechanisms in this document can generate more zero-
       length UDP packets for a UDP option aware endpoint than for a
    legacy
       (non-aware) endpoint (e.g., based some error conditions) and some
       can generate fewer (e.g., fragment reassembly).
    -->


We prefer the phrase "(non-aware)" just be removed, as "legacy" already implies "not UDP option aware." There is also a typo to be fixed (s/based/based on/):

Some of the mechanisms in this document can generate more zero-length UDP packets for a UDP Option aware endpoint than for a legacy endpoint (e.g., based on some error conditions) and some can generate fewer (e.g., fragment reassembly).

    20) <!--[rfced] We note that "TCP Sharing" does not occur in RFC
    9040, but
    it does use "TCB sharing". In the sentence below, should "TCP Sharing"
    be updated to "TCB sharing"?

    Original:
       Some TCP connection parameters, stored in the TCP Control
    Block, can
       be usefully shared either among concurrent connections or between
       connections in sequence, known as TCP Sharing [RFC9040].

    Perhaps:
       Some TCP connection parameters, stored in the TCP Control Block
    (TCB),
       can be usefully shared either among concurrent connections or
    between
       connections in sequence, known as TCB sharing [RFC9040].
    -->


We agree with this change. "TCP Sharing" was a typo.

    21) <!--[rfced] We note that no other drafts, only RFCs, are mentioned
    in Section 22. Therefore, may we update the section title as follows?

    Original:
       22. Interactions with other RFCs (and drafts)

    Perhaps:
       22. Interactions with Other RFCs
    -->


We agree with this change.

    22) <!--[rfced] FYI - To clarify the quoted text, we have added the
    following citation.

    Original:
       TE defines the length
       of an IPv6 payload inside UDP as pointing to less than the end of
       the UDP payload, enabling trailing options for that IPv6 packet:

          "..the IPv6 packet length (i.e., the Payload Length value in
           the IPv6 header plus the IPv6 header size) is less than or
           equal to the UDP payload length (i.e., the Length value in
           the UDP header minus the UDP header size)"

    Current (using blockquote):
       In [RFC6081], TE defines the length
       of an IPv6 payload inside UDP as pointing to less than the end of
       the UDP payload, enabling trailing options for that IPv6 packet:

       |  ...the IPv6 packet length (i.e., the Payload Length value in the
       |  IPv6 header plus the IPv6 header size) is less than or equal to
       |  the UDP payload length (i.e., the Length value in the UDP header
       |  minus the UDP header size)
    -->


We are fine with the addition of this reference; however, upon reflection, we would prefer to eliminate the acronym TE. How about:

CURRENT:

Teredo extensions (TEs) define use of a similar difference between these lengths for trailers [RFC4380] [RFC6081]. In [RFC6081], TE defines the length of an IPv6 payload inside UDP as pointing to less than the end of the UDP payload, enabling trailing options for that IPv6 packet:

NEW:

Teredo extensions define use of a similar difference between these lengths for trailers [RFC4380] [RFC6081].  In [RFC6081], Teredo extensions define the length of an IPv6 payload inside UDP as pointing to less than the end of the UDP payload, enabling trailing options for that IPv6 packet:


    23) <!-- [rfced] This text has been (mostly) updated to match the note
    that appears in the unified registry.  We say "mostly" because we
    will ask
    IANA to update their registry to use "RFC 9896" instead of "the
    corresponding reference".  Please review and let us know if any
    updates
    are needed.

    Original:
       IANA is also
       hereby requested to update the unified TCP/UDP ExID registry with
       the direction that "16-bit ExIDs can be used with either TCP or
    UDP;
       32-bit ExIDs can be used with TCP or their first 16 bits can be
    used
       with UDP", and with further detail provided below.

    Current:
       IANA has added a note to the unified TCP/UDP
       ExID registry specifying the following:

       |  Note 16-bit ExIDs can be used with either TCP or UDP; 32-bit
    ExIDs
       |  can be used with TCP or their first 16 bits can be used with
    UDP.
       |  Use with each transport (TCP, UDP) is indicated in the protocol
       |  column, as defined in RFC 9868.
    -->


The note to the registry looks good to us.

    24) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we update this sentence as follows?

    Original:
       Values in the TCP/UDP ExID registry are to be assigned by IANA
    using
       first-come, first-served (FCFS) rules applied to both the ExID
    value
       and the acronym [RFC8126].

    Perhaps:
      Values in the TCP/UDP ExID registry are to be assigned by IANA using
      the First Come First Served (FCFS) policy [RFC8126], which
    applies to
      both the ExID value and the acronym.
    -->


We agree with this change.

    25) <!--[rfced] FYI - We've added a URL to this reference. Please
    review
    and let us know of any objections.

    Original:
       [Zu20]    Zullo, R., T. Jones, and G. Fairhurst, "Overcoming the
                 Sorrows of the Young UDP Options," 2020 Network Traffic
                 Measurement and Analysis Conference (TMA), IEEE, 2020.

    Current:
       [Zu20]     Zullo, R., Jones, T., and G. Fairhurst, "Overcoming the
                  Sorrows of the Young UDP Options", 4th Network Traffic
                  Measurement and Analysis Conference (TMA), 2020,
                 
    <https://dl.ifip.org/db/conf/tma/tma2020/tma2020-camera-
    paper70.pdf
    <https://dl.ifip.org/db/conf/tma/tma2020/tma2020-camera-paper70.pdf>>.
    -->


I have no objections, but Joe has concerns about the stability of this URL.

The responsible AD for this RFC-to-be, Gorry Fairhurst, is a co-author of that document; perhaps he can speak to that point.

I think a link to IFIP seems stable to me.


    26) <!--[rfced] Terminology

    a) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to be used
    inconsistently. May we update to use the term on the right to make it
    consistent throughout the document?

     extended length > Extended Length
     option length > Option Length
     UDP length > UDP Length
     UDP option > UPD Option


We are OK with these changes.

    b) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to be used
    inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know
    if/how they
    may be made consistent.

     UDP Timestamp vs. UDP timestamp
    -->


We believe that the usage is correct as is; the contexts are different. Section 11.4 says:

UDP fragmentation relies on a fragment expiration timer, which can be preset or could use a value computed using the UDP Timestamp option.


whereas Section 11.8 says:

UDP timestamps are modeled after TCP timestamps and have similar expectations. In particular, they are expected to follow these guidelines:


    27) <!--[rfced] Abbreviations

    a) FYI - We have added expansions for the following abbreviations
    per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each
    expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.

     Cyclic Redundancy Check (CRC)
     Datagram Congestion Control Protocol (DCCP)
     Effective MTU for Receiving (EMTU_R)
     Internet Small Computer System Interface (iSCSI)
     Path MTU (PMTU)
     Stream Control Transmission Protocol (SCTP)
     TCP Authentication Option Encryption (TCP-AO-ENC)


The following change is requested for the first use of EMTU_R:

Section 11.4, CURRENT:

The Fragmentation (FRAG, Kind=3) option supports UDP fragmentation and reassembly, which can be used to transfer UDP messages larger than allowed by the IP receive MTU (Effective MTU for Receiving (EMTU_R) [RFC1122]).

NEW:

The Fragmentation (FRAG, Kind=3) option supports UDP fragmentation and reassembly, which can be used to transfer UDP messages larger than allowed by the IP Effective MTU for Receiving (EMTU_R) [RFC1122].


The following change is requested for the first (and only) use TCP-AO-ENC:

Section 12.2, OLD:

UENC is expected to provide all of the services of the AUTH option (Section 11.9) and in addition to encrypt the UDP user data and some (e.g., later, in sequence) UDP options, in a similar manner as TCP Authentication Option Encryption (TCP-AO-ENC) [To18].

NEW:

UENC is expected to provide all of the services of the AUTH option (Section 11.9) and in addition to encrypt the UDP user data and some (e.g., later, in sequence) UDP options, in a similar manner as TCP Authentication Option Extension for Payload Encryption (TCP-AO-ENC) [To18].

    b) How should "MMS_S" be expanded?

    Original:
       Suppose that MMS_S is the PMTU less the size of
       the IP header and the UDP header, i.e., the maximum UDP message
    size
       that can be successfully sent in a single UDP datagram if there are
       no IP options or extension headers and no UDP per-fragment options.


This was intended to be a local definition of the symbol MMS_S for use in the equation that follows the above paragraph, and it's used nowhere else. Just expanding it in the obvious way as Maximum Message Size for Sending (that's what it's mnemonic for) would result in some really weird text. What about the following edits to make it clear that we are defining a symbol, not using an acronym?

Section 11.6, CURRENT:

These parameters plus the Path MTU (PMTU) allow a sender to compute the size of the largest pre-fragmentation UDP packet that a receiver will guarantee to accept. Suppose that MMS_S is the PMTU less the size of the IP header and the UDP header, i.e., the maximum UDP message size that can be successfully sent in a single UDP datagram if there are no IP options or extension headers and no UDP per-fragment options.

Then, the size of the largest pre-fragmentation UDP packet that the receiver will guarantee to accept is the smaller of the MRDS size and

(MMS_S - 12) * (MRDS segs) - 2 - (Total Per-Frag IP/UDP Options) + 8

NEW:

These parameters plus the Path MTU (PMTU) allow a sender to compute the size of the largest pre-fragmentation UDP packet that a receiver will guarantee to accept. Define MMS_S as the PMTU less the size of the IP header and the UDP header, i.e., the maximum UDP message size that can be successfully sent in a single UDP datagram if there are no IP options or extension headers and no UDP per-fragment options. Then the size of the largest pre-fragmentation UDP packet that the receiver will guarantee to accept is the smaller of the MRDS size and

(MMS_S - 12) * (MRDS segs) - 2 - (Total Per-Frag IP/UDP Options) + 8


    c) We note that "TIME" is expanded as "Timestamps" and "Timestamp"
    (plural and singular). How should it be updated for consistency?

    Original:
       11.8. Timestamps (TIME)
       ...
       The Timestamp (TIME, Kind=8) option exchanges two four-byte
    unsigned
       timestamp fields.

    Similarly, should "TS" be expanded as "Timestamp" or "Timestamps"
    (singular or plural)?

    Original:
       It serves a similar purpose to TCP's TS option
       [RFC7323], enabling UDP to estimate the round-trip time (RTT)
       between hosts.
    -->


It should be singular ("Timestamp").

    28) <!--[rfced] To avoid redundant acronym expansions, should the
    following instances be updated for simplicity?

    a) APC checksums: If expanded, "APC checksum" would read as
    "Additional
    Payload Checksum checksum".

    Original:
       >> UDP packets with incorrect APC checksums SHOULD be passed to the
       application with an indication of APC failure.
       ...
       >> UDP packets with unrecognized APC lengths MUST receive the same
       treatment as UDP packets with incorrect APC checksums.

    Perhaps:
       >> UDP packets with incorrect APCs SHOULD be passed to the
       application with an indication of APC failure.
       ...
       >> UDP packets with unrecognized APC lengths MUST receive the same
       treatment as UDP packets with incorrect APCs.


The option is called APC, but within the APC is a kind, a length, and a checksum field. We would therefore prefer:

   >> UDP packets with incorrect APC Option checksums fields SHOULD be passed to the
   application with an indication of APC Option checksum failure.
   ...
   >> UDP packets with unrecognized APC lengths MUST receive the same
   treatment as UDP packets with incorrect APC Option checksum fields.

    b) MRDS size: If expanded, "MRDS size" would read "Maximum Reassembled
    Datagram Size size".

    Original:
       MRDS size is the UDP equivalent of IP's EMTU_R but the
       two are not related [RFC1122].

    Perhaps:
       MRDS is the UDP equivalent of IP's EMTU_R but the
       two are not related [RFC1122].


We would prefer:

The MRDS size field is the UDP equivalent of IP’s EMTU_R, but the two are not related [RFC1122].


    c) TSval value: If expanded, "TSval value" would read as "TS Value
    value".

    Original:
       Received TSval and TSecr values are provided to the
       application, which can pass the TSval value to be used as TSecr on
       UDP messages sent in response (i.e., to echo the received TSval).

    Perhaps:
       Received TSval and TSecr values are provided to the
       application, which can pass the TSval to be used as TSecr on
       UDP messages sent in response (i.e., to echo the received TSval).
    -->


We would prefer:

Received TSval and TSecr field contents are provided to the application, which can pass the received TSval to be used as TSecr in UDP messages sent in response (i.e., to echo the received TSval).

    29) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the
    online Style Guide
    <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
    and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature
    typically result in more precise language, which is helpful for
    readers.

    Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but
    this should
    still be reviewed as a best practice.
    -->


    Thank you.

    Alanna Paloma and Sandy Ginoza
    RFC Production Center





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    RFC 9868 (draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-45)

    Title            : Transport Options for UDP
    Author(s)        : J. Touch, C. M. Heard, Ed.
    WG Chair(s)      : Martin Duke, Zaheduzzaman Sarker

    Area Director(s) : Gorry Fairhurst, Mike Bishop

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