Hello Jérôme, I hope everything is going okay on your end.
<nudge /> could you, as shepherd, please respond to Alice’s request? Best, Carlos. > On Sep 14, 2025, at 9:57 PM, Carlos Pignataro <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hello, Jérôme, > > Bumping this up in your inbox -- apologies if I missed a reply, but I believe > I have not seen your response. > > Best, > > Carlos. > > On Sat, Sep 6, 2025 at 4:31 PM Alice Russo <[email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> Jérôme, >> >> As document shepherd, please review the edited document and let us know if >> you approve it or any updates are needed. Re: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-rfcdiff.html >> (which shows all changes from the approved I-D), please review the following >> changes, at minimum. Here, "S" stands for "Section". >> >> - S1.1 2nd paragraph, added text starting with 'When we say'. >> - S1.1 last paragraph, rephrased. >> - S3 last paragraph, rephrased. >> - S5.4, added text starting with 'Memory as well as'. >> - S6.1 2nd paragraph, rephrased. >> >> Thank you. >> >> Alice Russo >> RFC Production Center >> >> I wrote: >> > Carlos, >> > >> > Thank you for your reply. The revised files are here (please refresh): >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.html >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.txt >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.pdf >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.xml >> > >> > This diff file shows all changes from the approved I-D: >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-diff.html >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-rfcdiff.html (side by side) >> > >> > This diff file shows the changes made during AUTH48 thus far: >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-auth48diff.html >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by >> > side) >> > >> > This diff file shows only the changes since the last posted version: >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-lastrfcdiff.html >> > >> > In addition to the changes you requested: >> > - removed extraneous 'to'. >> > - lowercased 'fluorinated'. >> > - replaced angled quotes with straight quotes per RFC style. >> > >> > Re: >> >> After fixing these three nits, please note and write down my Approval of >> >> the document at https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9845 >> > >> > Your approval has been recorded. We await word from your coauthors >> > and the Document Shepherd before continuing the publication process. >> > >> > Thank you. >> > RFC Editor/ar
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