Jérôme, This is a reminder that we await word from you regarding this document. Details below.
Thank you. Alice Russo RFC Production Center > On Sep 17, 2025, at 8:10 AM, Alice Russo <[email protected]> wrote: > > Jérôme, > > This is a reminder that we await word from you regarding this document. FYI, > Section 1.1, 2nd paragraph has been updated further using text sent by A. > Clemm, Ed. > > Recommended diff (which shows all changes from the approved I-D): > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-rfcdiff.html > > Alice Russo > RFC Production Center > >> On Sep 6, 2025, at 1:31 PM, Alice Russo <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Jérôme, >> >> As document shepherd, please review the edited document and let us know if >> you approve it or any updates are needed. Re: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-rfcdiff.html >> (which shows all changes from the approved I-D), please review the following >> changes, at minimum. Here, "S" stands for "Section". >> >> - S1.1 2nd paragraph, added text starting with 'When we say'. >> - S1.1 last paragraph, rephrased. >> - S3 last paragraph, rephrased. >> - S5.4, added text starting with 'Memory as well as'. >> - S6.1 2nd paragraph, rephrased. >> >> Thank you. >> >> Alice Russo >> RFC Production Center >> >> I wrote: >>> Carlos, >>> >>> Thank you for your reply. The revised files are here (please refresh): >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.html >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.txt >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.pdf >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.xml >>> >>> This diff file shows all changes from the approved I-D: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-diff.html >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-rfcdiff.html (side by side) >>> >>> This diff file shows the changes made during AUTH48 thus far: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-auth48diff.html >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side) >>> >>> This diff file shows only the changes since the last posted version: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-lastrfcdiff.html >>> >>> In addition to the changes you requested: >>> - removed extraneous 'to'. >>> - lowercased 'fluorinated'. >>> - replaced angled quotes with straight quotes per RFC style. >>> >>> Re: >>>> After fixing these three nits, please note and write down my Approval of >>>> the document at https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9845 >>> >>> Your approval has been recorded. We await word from your coauthors >>> and the Document Shepherd before continuing the publication process. >>> >>> Thank you. >>> RFC Editor/ar > -- auth48archive mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
