Hi Med, Thank you for your reply!
Sincerely, Sarah Tarrant RFC Production Center > On Sep 23, 2025, at 12:57 AM, [email protected] wrote: > > Hi Sarah, all, > > Please see inline. > > Cheers, > Med > >> -----Message d'origine----- >> De : Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> >> Envoyé : lundi 22 septembre 2025 22:48 >> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <[email protected]>; >> [email protected] >> Cc : [email protected]; [email protected]; rfc-editor@rfc- >> editor.org; [email protected] >> Objet : Document intake questions about <draft-ietf-opsawg-secure- >> tacacs-yang-13> >> >> Author(s), >> >> Congratulations, your document has been successfully added to the >> RFC Editor queue! >> The team at the RFC Production Center (RPC) is looking forward to >> working with you as your document moves forward toward >> publication. To help reduce processing time and improve editing >> accuracy, please respond to the questions below. 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