Hi Alice, Thanks for your work on this document. I agree with Jasdip's comments, and have added two other changes below. Everything else looks fine to me.
On Tue, Oct 07, 2025 at 03:29:38PM +0000, Jasdip Singh wrote: > On Fri, Oct 03, 2025 at 01:28:38PM -0700, [email protected] wrote: >> ... Section 1 OLD: Indentation and whitespace in examples are provided only to illustrate element relationships, and they are not a required feature of this specification. NEW: Indentation and whitespace in examples are provided only to illustrate element relationships, and are not a required feature of this specification. Comment: The "they" in OLD might be interpreted as referring to "element relationships", rather than "indentation and whitespace". Omitting the "they" addresses this problem. --- Section 2.3 OLD: This is the same as what the server does with the "geofeed1" extension identifier. NEW: This is what the server does with the "geofeed1" extension identifier. Comment: Omitting "the same as" simplifies the sentence and reads more clearly (IMHO). -Tom -- auth48archive mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
