Hi Alice, On Thu, Oct 09, 2025 at 11:06:54AM -0700, Alice Russo wrote: > Thank you for your replies; please see one follow-up below. The revised files > are here (please refresh): > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877.xml > > This diff file shows all changes from the approved I-D: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877-diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877-rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > This diff file shows the changes made during AUTH48 thus far: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877-auth48diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > Re: Section 1, in addition to removing 'they' as Tom requested, we've removed > the comma and updated to 'features' plural. Previously, the comma indicated > two independent clauses. > > Original: > Indentation and whitespace in examples are provided only to > illustrate element relationships, and are not a required feature of > this specification. > > Current text: > Indentation and whitespace in examples are provided only to > illustrate element relationships and are not required features > of this specification. > > Alternatively, please let us know if you prefer: > In examples, indentation and whitespace are provided only to > illustrate element relationships: neither is a required feature > of this specification. > > We will wait to hear from you again and from your coauthors > before continuing the publication process. This page shows > the AUTH48 status of your document: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9877
Thanks for these updates. The suggested text (i.e. "Indentation and whitespace in examples are provided only to illustrate element relationships and are not required features of this specification") looks fine to me. I approve for publication. -Tom -- auth48archive mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
