Re-,
Please find some comments about the edited version:
# Abstract
OLD: The document also defines IANA-maintained modules for ICMP types and IPv6
extension headers
NEW: The document also defines initial versions of IANA-maintained modules for
ICMP types and IPv6 extension headers
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
# Section 1
OLD:
This document also defines IANA-maintained modules for ICMP types and
IPv6 extension headers.
NEW:
This document also defines initial versions of IANA-maintained modules for
ICMP types and
IPv6 extension headers.
# Section 4
OLD:
This Yang module imports types from [RFC6991], [RFC8519], and
^^^^
[RFC8294].
NEW:
This YANG module imports types from [RFC6991], [RFC8519], and
[RFC8294].
# Section 4
(1)
OLD:
"Match based on a VLAN range of a VLAN list is supported.";
NEW:
"Match based on a VLAN range is supported.";
(2)
OLD:
"Match based on an I-SID range of a VLAN list is supported.";
NEW:
"Match based on an I-SID range is supported.";
# Section 5
Please revert back all the changes made to the second paragraph. The OLD is
correct per the guidance in Section 3.7.1 of 8407bis.
Thank you.
Cheers,
Med
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> RFC9899 (draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-17)
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> Title : Extensions to the Access Control Lists (ACLs)
> YANG Model
> Author(s) : O. Gonzalez de Dios, S. Barguil, M. Boucadair,
> Q. Wu
> WG Chair(s) : Kent Watsen, Lou Berger
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