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> > On Nov 14, 2025, at 6:41 AM, Kaelin Foody <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Med, > > Thank you for your replies. We have updated the document accordingly. A few > follow-up questions/notes: > > a) To confirm, should “striped” read as “stripped” in the instances below? > Thank you for letting us know no updates should be made otherwise. > >>> c) We note that the description of "enum" appears slightly >>> different in Sections 6.3.1, 6.3.2, and 6.3.3. Should these >>> instances be made consistent? If so, please let us know how to >>> update. >>> >>> In addition, should "striped" be "stripped"? >>> >>> Original: >>> >>> "enum": Replicates the name from the registry with all illegal >>> characters (e.g., spaces) are striped. >>> >>> "enum": Replicates the name from the registry with all illegal >>> characters (e.g., spaces) striped. >>> >>> "enum": Replicates the description from the registry with all >>> spaces >>> striped. >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> >>> "enum": Replicates the name from the registry with all >>> illegal >>> characters (e.g., spaces) stripped. >> >> [Med] The OLD is correct as there is no "name" field in the IANA registry >> discussed in 6.3.3 > > > b) FYI: We have reverted these changes as requested below. I want to make sure that after reverting the changes, the descriptions for enum have been made consistent and that striped has been replaced by stripped. Thanks > >> # Section 5 >> >> Please revert back all the changes made to the second paragraph. The OLD is >> correct per the guidance in Section 3.7.1 of 8407bis. > > > Upon careful review, please contact us with any further updates or with your > approval of the document in its current form. > We will await approvals from each party listed on the AUTH48 status page for > this document prior to moving forward in the publication process. > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9899 > > > — FILES (please refresh): — > > The updated files have been posted here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9899.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9899.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9899.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9899.xml > > The relevant diff files have been posted here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9899-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes > only) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9899-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH 48 > changes side by side) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9899-diff.html (all changes) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9899-rfcdiff.html (all changes side by > side) > > Thank you, > > Kaelin Foody > RFC Production Center > >> On Nov 12, 2025, at 3:15 AM, [email protected] wrote: >> >> Re-, >> >> Please find some comments about the edited version: >> >> # Abstract >> >> OLD: The document also defines IANA-maintained modules for ICMP types and >> IPv6 extension headers >> >> NEW: The document also defines initial versions of IANA-maintained modules >> for ICMP types and IPv6 extension headers >> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ >> >> # Section 1 >> >> OLD: >> This document also defines IANA-maintained modules for ICMP types and >> IPv6 extension headers. >> >> NEW: >> This document also defines initial versions of IANA-maintained modules for >> ICMP types and >> IPv6 extension headers. >> >> # Section 4 >> >> OLD: >> This Yang module imports types from [RFC6991], [RFC8519], and >> ^^^^ >> [RFC8294]. >> >> NEW: >> This YANG module imports types from [RFC6991], [RFC8519], and >> [RFC8294]. >> >> # Section 4 >> >> (1) >> >> OLD: >> "Match based on a VLAN range of a VLAN list is supported."; >> >> NEW: >> "Match based on a VLAN range is supported."; >> >> (2) >> >> OLD: >> "Match based on an I-SID range of a VLAN list is supported."; >> >> NEW: >> "Match based on an I-SID range is supported."; >> >> # Section 5 >> >> Please revert back all the changes made to the second paragraph. 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