And these last changes look good to me too!

spt

> On Dec 11, 2025, at 11:13, Madison Church <[email protected]> 
> wrote:
> 
> Hi Sean and Joe,
> 
> This is a friendly reminder that we await your approvals for the formatting 
> of this document. For formatting changes, we have updated relevant URLs to be 
> clickable in the HTML and PDF outputs. In addition to formatting, we have 
> updated the date and added a couple of missing periods in a few unordered 
> lists throughout the document (see Sections 4 and 6: 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-lastdiff.html).
> 
> Please review the XML file and its TXT, HTML, and PDF outputs, and let us 
> know if any changes are required or if you approve the RFC for publication. 
> While this is your approval of the XML and its outputs, we consider this your 
> final assent that the document is ready for publication. To request changes 
> or approve your RFC for publication, please reply to this email. Please use 
> ‘REPLY ALL’, as all the parties CCed on this message need to see your 
> approval.
> 
> Note that we will only make changes in the XML file from this point on.
> 
> XML file:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.xml
> 
> Output files:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.txt
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.pdf
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html
> 
> Lastdiff of the text (shows latest changes):
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-lastdiff.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side)
> 
> Comprehensive diff file of the text:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-diff.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> 
> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847
> 
> Thank you!
> Madison Church
> RFC Production Center
> 
>> On Dec 4, 2025, at 4:15 PM, Sean Turner <[email protected]> wrote:
>> 
>> I pulled the md file so I can more easily make the repo match final product.
>> 
>> spt
>> 
>>> On Dec 4, 2025, at 15:05, Madison Church <[email protected]> 
>>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi Joe and Sean,
>>> 
>>> We have converted the kramdown-rfc file to RFCXML. For formatting changes, 
>>> we have updated relevant URLs to be clickable in the HTML and PDF outputs. 
>>> In addition to formatting, we have updated the date and added a couple of 
>>> missing periods in a few unordered lists throughout the document (see 
>>> Sections 4 and 6: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-lastdiff.html).
>>> 
>>> Please review the XML file and its TXT, HTML, and PDF outputs, and let us 
>>> know if any changes are required or if you approve the RFC for publication. 
>>> While this is your approval of the XML and its outputs, we consider this 
>>> your final assent that the document is ready for publication. To request 
>>> changes or approve your RFC for publication, please reply to this email. 
>>> Please use ‘REPLY ALL’, as all the parties CCed on this message need to see 
>>> your approval.
>>> 
>>> Note that we will only make changes in the XML file from this point on.
>>> 
>>> XML file:
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.xml
>>> 
>>> Output files:
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.txt
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.pdf
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html
>>> 
>>> Lastdiff of the text (shows latest changes):
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-lastdiff.html
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>> 
>>> Comprehensive diff file of the text:
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-diff.html
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>> 
>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847
>>> 
>>> Thank you!
>>> Madison Church
>>> RFC Production Center
>>> 
>>>> On Dec 4, 2025, at 1:56 PM, Madison Church <[email protected]> 
>>>> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Hi Joe,
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you for your reply! We have marked your approval for the contents of 
>>>> this document (see: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847).
>>>> 
>>>> We will now move on to the second part of the kramdown-rfc AUTH48 process, 
>>>> which will be sent in a separate email shortly.
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you!
>>>> 
>>>> Madison Church
>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>> 
>>>>> On Dec 3, 2025, at 4:17 PM, Joseph Salowey <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thank you Madison.  I approve of the document's content.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Joe 
>>>>> 
>>>>> On Tue, Dec 2, 2025 at 6:54 AM Madison Church 
>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>> Hi Sean,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thank you for your reply! We have marked your approval for the document’s 
>>>>> content (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847). Once we receive 
>>>>> Joe’s approval for the content of the document, we will convert the 
>>>>> document to XML to make any remaining formatting updates and ask for 
>>>>> formatting approvals at that time.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>> 
>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Dec 1, 2025, at 8:28 AM, Sean Turner <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Nov 26, 2025, at 14:32, Madison Church 
>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Hi Sean,
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply! Please see inline.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Nov 26, 2025, at 10:55 AM, Sean Turner <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Madison,
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Hi! Question about formatting:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> I see that the asides were converted to quotes:
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html#name-recommended-note
>>>>>>>> and
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html#name-tls-exporter-labels-registr
>>>>>>>> In other RFCs they stayed as asides:
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9881.html#name-ml-dsa-public-keys-in-pkix
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Why are they different?
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thank you for asking. We use {:quote} instead of {:aside} for notes 
>>>>>>> that appear in an IANA registry because the document is quoting the 
>>>>>>> IANA registry. We do not believe these fit the description of {:aside} 
>>>>>>> (<aside> in XML), which is defined as “a container for content that is 
>>>>>>> semantically less important or tangential to the content that surrounds 
>>>>>>> it".
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Okay well that makes total sense ;)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> One other formatting thing:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> In s7: s/{{RFC8447, Section 17}}/{{Section 17 of RFC8447}}
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> We have updated as requested! See updated files below.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.txt
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.pdf
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.xml
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.md
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-diff.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-diff.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-auth48rfcdiff.html (side 
>>>>>>> by side)
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, see: 
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> We will await content approvals from each author prior to moving 
>>>>>>> forward with formatting updates.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc (including the 
>>>>>>> two-part approval process), see 
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I approve the formatting for this I-D.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I also approve the contents for this I-D.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> spt
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> spt
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> On Nov 25, 2025, at 11:06, Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> This is a friendly reminder that we have yet to hear back from you 
>>>>>>>>> regarding this document’s readiness for publication.  
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Note that we have made additional updates to the IANA Considerations 
>>>>>>>>> section based on a note that we received from IANA. Please review:
>>>>>>>>>> The actions have all been completed, but the last three paragraphs 
>>>>>>>>>> of Section 18 (the IANA Considerations section) need to be removed. 
>>>>>>>>>> The authors decided to stop sending requesters to the mailing list 
>>>>>>>>>> they’re referring to in that section and instead send them directly 
>>>>>>>>>> to IANA. (In fact, Rich is talking about shutting that 
>>>>>>>>>> [email protected] list down entirely, which is what drew my 
>>>>>>>>>> attention to this.) The note that’s been pasted into that section is 
>>>>>>>>>> actually an old note that we removed from the registry as we were 
>>>>>>>>>> performing the actions.Our understanding is that the section should 
>>>>>>>>>> just read, “This document is entirely about changes to TLS-related 
>>>>>>>>>> IANA registries.”
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.txt
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.pdf
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.xml
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.md
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-diff.html
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-auth48rfcdiff.html (side 
>>>>>>>>> by side)
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-auth48rfcdiff.html 
>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, see: 
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Please review the contents of the document carefully. Contact us with 
>>>>>>>>> any further updates or with your approval of the document’s contents 
>>>>>>>>> in its current form. We will await approvals from each author prior 
>>>>>>>>> to moving forward with formatting updates.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc (including the 
>>>>>>>>> two-part approval process), see 
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 17, 2025, at 2:39 PM, Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Hi Joe,
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply! We have updated the document accordingly 
>>>>>>>>>> and have no further questions related to content at this time.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Please review the contents of the document carefully. Contact us 
>>>>>>>>>> with any further updates or with your approval of the document’s 
>>>>>>>>>> contents in its current form. We will await approvals from each 
>>>>>>>>>> author prior to moving forward with formatting updates.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc (including the 
>>>>>>>>>> two-part approval process), see 
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.txt
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.pdf
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.xml
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.md
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-auth48rfcdiff.html (side 
>>>>>>>>>> by side)
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-auth48rfcdiff.html 
>>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 15, 2025, at 8:20 PM, Joseph Salowey <[email protected]> 
>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Attached is an updated markdown file, did we have this in a github 
>>>>>>>>>>> repo as well? Might be easier to make comments and suggest changes 
>>>>>>>>>>> through PRs.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> I only made one substantive change to update my Organization from 
>>>>>>>>>>> Venafi to CyberArk.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> I also ran fix-lint to remove some of the trailing whitespace so I 
>>>>>>>>>>> can build it.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> I also modified the text in comment 5 to apply the "Singular" 
>>>>>>>>>>> option which is what I think is the best. 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> I didn't find any issues with inclusive language. 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Joe
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> On Sat, Nov 15, 2025 at 4:53 PM Joseph Salowey <[email protected]> 
>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>> I'm in the process of document review.  Questions answered below.  
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Joe
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> On Thu, Oct 30, 2025 at 4:19 PM <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as 
>>>>>>>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source 
>>>>>>>>>>> file.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Note that we have updated the short title, which 
>>>>>>>>>>> appears in the
>>>>>>>>>>> running header in the PDF output, as follows. Please let us know 
>>>>>>>>>>> any objections.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>> (D)TLS IANA Registry Updates
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>>>> TLS and DTLS IANA Registry Updates
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] This looks good to me
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that 
>>>>>>>>>>> appear in the title)
>>>>>>>>>>> for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe]I don't think there are additional keywords
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We will do the following when we convert the 
>>>>>>>>>>> file to RFCXML:
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> - Update relevant URLs to be clickable in the HTML and PDF outputs
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] OK
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Because this document updates RFC 8447, please
>>>>>>>>>>> review the errata reported for RFC 8447 
>>>>>>>>>>> (https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/rfc8447)
>>>>>>>>>>> and let us know if you confirm our opinion that none of them
>>>>>>>>>>> are relevant to the content of this document.
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe]  The offending sentence no longer appears in the document 
>>>>>>>>>>> since the IANA action has already been completed.  
>>>>>>>>>>> The registry has be updated with the correct name since TLS 1.3. 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] In the sentence below, is the intention to have 
>>>>>>>>>>> consensus
>>>>>>>>>>> to leave one item or multiple items marked?
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Original: 
>>>>>>>>>>> The IETF might have consensus to leave an items marked as "N" on the
>>>>>>>>>>> basis of its having limited applicability or usage constraints.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps (Singular): 
>>>>>>>>>>> The IETF might have consensus to leave an item marked as "N" on the
>>>>>>>>>>> basis of the item having limited applicability or usage constraints.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Or (Plural): 
>>>>>>>>>>> The IETF might have consensus to leave items marked as "N" on the
>>>>>>>>>>> basis of the items having limited applicability or usage 
>>>>>>>>>>> constraints.
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe]  I don't think it changes the intent of the section.  I have 
>>>>>>>>>>> a slight preference for the Singular, but either will do.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have reordered the values in Table 1 to 
>>>>>>>>>>> reflect
>>>>>>>>>>> how they are listed in the "TLS ExtensionType Values" registry.
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] Thank you
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] May we remove this sentence from the end of Section 
>>>>>>>>>>> 14?
>>>>>>>>>>> This action is already listed in Section 7.  
>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>> IANA is requested to rename the "Note" column to "Comment" column in
>>>>>>>>>>> TLS Exporter Labels registry.
>>>>>>>>>>> -->   
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] Yes
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] IANA provided the following note when they notified 
>>>>>>>>>>> us that their
>>>>>>>>>>> actions were complete:
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> NOTE: Some text at the end of the IANA Considerations section 
>>>>>>>>>>> concerning request
>>>>>>>>>>> submission needs to be removed or replaced. Details at the end of 
>>>>>>>>>>> the list of
>>>>>>>>>>> actions.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Per this note and to reflect what appears in the TLS-related IANA 
>>>>>>>>>>> registries,
>>>>>>>>>>> we have updated the text as shown below. Please let us know if any 
>>>>>>>>>>> changes are
>>>>>>>>>>> needed.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>> Requests for assignments from the registry's Specification Required
>>>>>>>>>>> range should be sent to the mailing list described in [This RFC,
>>>>>>>>>>> Section 16].  If approved, designated experts should notify IANA
>>>>>>>>>>> within three weeks.  For assistance, please contact [email protected].
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>>>> |  Note: Requests for registration in the "Specification Required"
>>>>>>>>>>> |  [RFC8126] range should be sent to [email protected] or submitted via
>>>>>>>>>>> |  IANA's application form, per [RFC 9847].  IANA will forward the
>>>>>>>>>>> |  request to the expert mailing list described in [RFC8447],
>>>>>>>>>>> |  Section 17 and track its progress.  See the registration 
>>>>>>>>>>> procedure
>>>>>>>>>>> |  table below for more information.
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] This looks good to me
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have added an expansion for the following 
>>>>>>>>>>> abbreviation
>>>>>>>>>>> per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each 
>>>>>>>>>>> expansion
>>>>>>>>>>> in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> International Data Encryption Algorithm (IDEA)
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] I believe this is correct. 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have updated the following terms to the 
>>>>>>>>>>> form on the
>>>>>>>>>>> right to match other documents in Cluster 430. Please let us know 
>>>>>>>>>>> any objections.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> ciphersuite(s) > cipher suite(s)
>>>>>>>>>>> code points > codepoints
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] This looks good, Thank you
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of 
>>>>>>>>>>> the online
>>>>>>>>>>> Style Guide 
>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
>>>>>>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature 
>>>>>>>>>>> typically
>>>>>>>>>>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this 
>>>>>>>>>>> should 
>>>>>>>>>>> still be reviewed as a best practice.
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe]  OK will review.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church and Alanna Paloma
>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> On Oct 30, 2025, at 4:18 PM, [email protected] wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Updated 2025/10/30
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Author(s):
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> The document was edited in kramdown-rfc as part of the RPC pilot 
>>>>>>>>>>> test (see 
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc).
>>>>>>>>>>>  
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Please review the procedures for AUTH48 using kramdown-rfc:
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_instructions_completing_auth48_using_kramdown
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Once your document has completed AUTH48, it will be published as 
>>>>>>>>>>> an RFC.  
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Files 
>>>>>>>>>>> -----
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> The files are available here:
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.md
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.txt
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Diff file of the text:
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Diff of the kramdown: 
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Tracking progress
>>>>>>>>>>> -----------------
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> The details of the AUTH48 status of your document are here:
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Please let us know if you have any questions.  
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your cooperation,
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>>>>>>> RFC9847 (draft-ietf-tls-rfc8447bis-15)
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Title            : IANA Registry Updates for TLS and DTLS
>>>>>>>>>>> Author(s)        : J. Salowey, S. Turner
>>>>>>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Joseph A. Salowey, Sean Turner, Deirdre Connolly
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Paul Wouters
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> <rfc9847.md>
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>> 
>>> 
>> 
> 

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