Hi Amanda,

The changes look good. Thank you!

Madison Church
RFC Production Center

> On Dec 19, 2025, at 1:36 PM, Amanda Baber via RT <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Hi all,
> 
> These changes are complete:
> 
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/tls-parameters
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/tls-extensiontype-values
> 
> thanks,
> Amanda
> 
> On Wed Dec 17 19:25:24 2025, [email protected] wrote:
>> IANA,
>> 
>> Please update the note on the "Recommended" column as follows for the
>> registries below:
>> TLS ExtensionType Values
>> TLS Cipher Suites
>> TLS Supported Groups
>> TLS Exporter Labels
>> TLS Certificate Types
>> TLS HashAlgorithm
>> TLS SignatureAlgorithm
>> TLS ClientCertificateType Identifiers
>> TLS PskKeyExchangeMode
>> TLS SignatureScheme
>> 
>> Current:
>> If "Recommended" column is set to "N", it does not necessarily
>> mean that it is flawed; rather, it indicates that the item either
>> has not been through the IETF consensus process, has limited
>> applicability, or is intended only for specific use cases. If the
>> "Recommended" column is set to "D," the item is discouraged and
>> SHOULD NOT or MUST NOT be used, depending upon the situation;
>> consult the item's references for clarity.
>> 
>> Updated (add "the" before "Recommended"):
>> If the "Recommended" column is set to "N", it does not necessarily
>> mean that it is flawed; rather, it indicates that the item either
>> has not been through the IETF consensus process, has limited
>> applicability, or is intended only for specific use cases. If the
>> "Recommended" column is set to "D," the item is discouraged and
>> SHOULD NOT or MUST NOT be used, depending upon the situation;
>> consult the item's references for clarity.
>> 
>> Thank you!
>> 
>> Madison Church
>> RFC Production Center
>> 
>>> On Dec 17, 2025, at 6:36 AM, Sean Turner <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Thanks!
>>> 
>>> spt
>>> 
>>>> On Dec 16, 2025, at 16:20, Madison Church <[email protected]
>>>> editor.org> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Hi Sean and Joe,
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you both for your replies (and apologies for the delayed reply
>>>> on my end)! We have noted both of your approvals here:
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847.
>>>> 
>>>> We will now send our updates along to IANA.
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you!
>>>> 
>>>> Madison Church
>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>> 
>>>>> On Dec 16, 2025, at 3:02 PM, Sean Turner <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> And these last changes look good to me too!
>>>>> 
>>>>> spt
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Dec 11, 2025, at 11:13, Madison Church <[email protected]
>>>>>> editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Hi Sean and Joe,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> This is a friendly reminder that we await your approvals for the
>>>>>> formatting of this document. For formatting changes, we have
>>>>>> updated relevant URLs to be clickable in the HTML and PDF outputs.
>>>>>> In addition to formatting, we have updated the date and added a
>>>>>> couple of missing periods in a few unordered lists throughout the
>>>>>> document (see Sections 4 and 6: https://www.rfc-
>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9847-lastdiff.html).
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Please review the XML file and its TXT, HTML, and PDF outputs, and
>>>>>> let us know if any changes are required or if you approve the RFC
>>>>>> for publication. While this is your approval of the XML and its
>>>>>> outputs, we consider this your final assent that the document is
>>>>>> ready for publication. To request changes or approve your RFC for
>>>>>> publication, please reply to this email. Please use ‘REPLY ALL’,
>>>>>> as all the parties CCed on this message need to see your approval.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Note that we will only make changes in the XML file from this
>>>>>> point on.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> XML file:
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.xml
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Output files:
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.txt
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.pdf
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Lastdiff of the text (shows latest changes):
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-lastdiff.html
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-lastrfcdiff.html (side
>>>>>> by side)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Comprehensive diff file of the text:
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-diff.html
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-rfcdiff.html (side by
>>>>>> side)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Dec 4, 2025, at 4:15 PM, Sean Turner <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I pulled the md file so I can more easily make the repo match
>>>>>>> final product.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> spt
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Dec 4, 2025, at 15:05, Madison Church <[email protected]
>>>>>>>> editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Hi Joe and Sean,
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> We have converted the kramdown-rfc file to RFCXML. For
>>>>>>>> formatting changes, we have updated relevant URLs to be
>>>>>>>> clickable in the HTML and PDF outputs. In addition to
>>>>>>>> formatting, we have updated the date and added a couple of
>>>>>>>> missing periods in a few unordered lists throughout the document
>>>>>>>> (see Sections 4 and 6: https://www.rfc-
>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9847-lastdiff.html).
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Please review the XML file and its TXT, HTML, and PDF outputs,
>>>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are required or if you approve
>>>>>>>> the RFC for publication. While this is your approval of the XML
>>>>>>>> and its outputs, we consider this your final assent that the
>>>>>>>> document is ready for publication. To request changes or approve
>>>>>>>> your RFC for publication, please reply to this email. Please use
>>>>>>>> ‘REPLY ALL’, as all the parties CCed on this message need to see
>>>>>>>> your approval.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Note that we will only make changes in the XML file from this
>>>>>>>> point on.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> XML file:
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.xml
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Output files:
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.txt
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.pdf
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Lastdiff of the text (shows latest changes):
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-lastdiff.html
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-lastrfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>> (side by side)
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Comprehensive diff file of the text:
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-diff.html
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-rfcdiff.html (side by
>>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> On Dec 4, 2025, at 1:56 PM, Madison Church <[email protected]
>>>>>>>>> editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Hi Joe,
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply! We have marked your approval for the
>>>>>>>>> contents of this document (see: https://www.rfc-
>>>>>>>>> editor.org/auth48/rfc9847).
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> We will now move on to the second part of the kramdown-rfc
>>>>>>>>> AUTH48 process, which will be sent in a separate email shortly.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 3, 2025, at 4:17 PM, Joseph Salowey <[email protected]>
>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you Madison.  I approve of the document's content.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Joe
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> On Tue, Dec 2, 2025 at 6:54 AM Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> Hi Sean,
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply! We have marked your approval for the
>>>>>>>>>> document’s content (see https://www.rfc-
>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/auth48/rfc9847). Once we receive Joe’s approval for
>>>>>>>>>> the content of the document, we will convert the document to
>>>>>>>>>> XML to make any remaining formatting updates and ask for
>>>>>>>>>> formatting approvals at that time.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 1, 2025, at 8:28 AM, Sean Turner <[email protected]>
>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 26, 2025, at 14:32, Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Sean,
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply! Please see inline.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 26, 2025, at 10:55 AM, Sean Turner <[email protected]>
>>>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison,
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi! Question about formatting:
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> I see that the asides were converted to quotes:
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html#name-
>>>>>>>>>>>>> recommended-note
>>>>>>>>>>>>> and
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html#name-tls-
>>>>>>>>>>>>> exporter-labels-registr
>>>>>>>>>>>>> In other RFCs they stayed as asides:
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9881.html#name-ml-dsa-
>>>>>>>>>>>>> public-keys-in-pkix
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Why are they different?
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for asking. We use {:quote} instead of {:aside}
>>>>>>>>>>>> for notes that appear in an IANA registry because the
>>>>>>>>>>>> document is quoting the IANA registry. We do not believe
>>>>>>>>>>>> these fit the description of {:aside} (<aside> in XML),
>>>>>>>>>>>> which is defined as “a container for content that is
>>>>>>>>>>>> semantically less important or tangential to the content
>>>>>>>>>>>> that surrounds it".
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Okay well that makes total sense ;)
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> One other formatting thing:
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> In s7: s/{{RFC8447, Section 17}}/{{Section 17 of RFC8447}}
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> We have updated as requested! See updated files below.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.xml
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.md
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please
>>>>>>>>>>>> refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-
>>>>>>>>>>>> auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-
>>>>>>>>>>>> auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-
>>>>>>>>>>>> auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, see:
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> We will await content approvals from each author prior to
>>>>>>>>>>>> moving forward with formatting updates.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc (including
>>>>>>>>>>>> the two-part approval process), see https://www.rfc-
>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> I approve the formatting for this I-D.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> I also approve the contents for this I-D.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> spt
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> spt
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 25, 2025, at 11:06, Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> This is a friendly reminder that we have yet to hear back
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> from you regarding this document’s readiness for
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> publication.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Note that we have made additional updates to the IANA
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Considerations section based on a note that we received
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> from IANA. Please review:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The actions have all been completed, but the last three
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> paragraphs of Section 18 (the IANA Considerations
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> section) need to be removed. The authors decided to stop
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> sending requesters to the mailing list they’re referring
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> to in that section and instead send them directly to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> IANA. (In fact, Rich is talking about shutting that tls-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [email protected] list down entirely, which is what
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> drew my attention to this.) The note that’s been pasted
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> into that section is actually an old note that we removed
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> from the registry as we were performing the actions.Our
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> understanding is that the section should just read, “This
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document is entirely about changes to TLS-related IANA
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> registries.”
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.xml
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.md
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, see:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please review the contents of the document carefully.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Contact us with any further updates or with your approval
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> of the document’s contents in its current form. We will
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> await approvals from each author prior to moving forward
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> with formatting updates.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (including the two-part approval process), see
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 17, 2025, at 2:39 PM, Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Joe,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply! We have updated the document
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> accordingly and have no further questions related to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> content at this time.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please review the contents of the document carefully.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Contact us with any further updates or with your approval
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> of the document’s contents in its current form. We will
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> await approvals from each author prior to moving forward
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> with formatting updates.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (including the two-part approval process), see
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.xml
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.md
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 15, 2025, at 8:20 PM, Joseph Salowey
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Attached is an updated markdown file, did we have this
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in a github repo as well? Might be easier to make
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> comments and suggest changes through PRs.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I only made one substantive change to update my
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Organization from Venafi to CyberArk.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I also ran fix-lint to remove some of the trailing
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> whitespace so I can build it.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I also modified the text in comment 5 to apply the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "Singular" option which is what I think is the best.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I didn't find any issues with inclusive language.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Joe
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Sat, Nov 15, 2025 at 4:53 PM Joseph Salowey
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  I'm in the process of document review.  Questions
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> answered below.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Joe
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Thu, Oct 30, 2025 at 4:19 PM <rfc-editor@rfc-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> are also in the source file.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Note that we have updated the short
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> title, which appears in the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> running header in the PDF output, as follows. Please let
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> us know any objections.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (D)TLS IANA Registry Updates
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> TLS and DTLS IANA Registry Updates
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] This looks good to me
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> that appear in the title)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe]I don't think there are additional keywords
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We will do the following when we
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> convert the file to RFCXML:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> - Update relevant URLs to be clickable in the HTML and
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> PDF outputs
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] OK
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Because this document updates RFC 8447,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> please
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> review the errata reported for RFC 8447
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/rfc8447)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and let us know if you confirm our opinion that none of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> them
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> are relevant to the content of this document.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe]  The offending sentence no longer appears in the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document since the IANA action has already been
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> completed.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The registry has be updated with the correct name since
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> TLS 1.3.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] In the sentence below, is the intention
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> to have consensus
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> to leave one item or multiple items marked?
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The IETF might have consensus to leave an items marked
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> as "N" on the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> basis of its having limited applicability or usage
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> constraints.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps (Singular):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The IETF might have consensus to leave an item marked as
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "N" on the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> basis of the item having limited applicability or usage
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> constraints.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Or (Plural):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The IETF might have consensus to leave items marked as
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "N" on the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> basis of the items having limited applicability or usage
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> constraints.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe]  I don't think it changes the intent of the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> section.  I have a slight preference for the Singular,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> but either will do.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have reordered the values in
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Table 1 to reflect
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> how they are listed in the "TLS ExtensionType Values"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> registry.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] Thank you
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] May we remove this sentence from the end
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> of Section 14?
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  This action is already listed in Section 7.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> IANA is requested to rename the "Note" column to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "Comment" column in
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> TLS Exporter Labels registry.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>   -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] Yes
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] IANA provided the following note when
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> they notified us that their
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> actions were complete:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> NOTE: Some text at the end of the IANA Considerations
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> section concerning request
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> submission needs to be removed or replaced. Details at
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the end of the list of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> actions.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Per this note and to reflect what appears in the TLS-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> related IANA registries,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> we have updated the text as shown below. Please let us
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> know if any changes are
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> needed.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Requests for assignments from the registry's
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Specification Required
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> range should be sent to the mailing list described in
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [This RFC,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Section 16].  If approved, designated experts should
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> notify IANA
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> within three weeks.  For assistance, please contact
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [email protected].
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> |  Note: Requests for registration in the "Specification
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Required"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> |  [RFC8126] range should be sent to [email protected] or
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> submitted via
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> |  IANA's application form, per [RFC 9847].  IANA will
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> forward the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> |  request to the expert mailing list described in
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [RFC8447],
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> |  Section 17 and track its progress.  See the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> registration procedure
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> |  table below for more information.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] This looks good to me
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have added an expansion for the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> following abbreviation
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> review each expansion
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> International Data Encryption Algorithm (IDEA)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] I believe this is correct.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have updated the following
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> terms to the form on the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> right to match other documents in Cluster 430. Please
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> let us know any objections.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ciphersuite(s) > cipher suite(s)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> code points > codepoints
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe] This looks good, Thank you
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> portion of the online
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Style Guide <https://www.rfc-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> this nature typically
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> readers.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> particular, but this should
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> still be reviewed as a best practice.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [Joe]  OK will review.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church and Alanna Paloma
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Oct 30, 2025, at 4:18 PM, [email protected]
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Updated 2025/10/30
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Author(s):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Your document has now entered AUTH48.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The document was edited in kramdown-rfc as part of the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RPC pilot test (see
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc).
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please review the procedures for AUTH48 using kramdown-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfc:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_instructions_completing_auth48_using_kramdown
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Once your document has completed AUTH48, it will be
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> published as
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> an RFC.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Files
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -----
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files are available here:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.md
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Diff file of the text:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Diff of the kramdown:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9847-md-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Tracking progress
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -----------------
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The details of the AUTH48 status of your document are
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> here:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9847
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please let us know if you have any questions.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your cooperation,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC9847 (draft-ietf-tls-rfc8447bis-15)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Title            : IANA Registry Updates for TLS and
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> DTLS
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Author(s)        : J. Salowey, S. Turner
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Joseph A. Salowey, Sean Turner,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Deirdre Connolly
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Paul Wouters
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <rfc9847.md>
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>> 
>>> 
> 

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