On Tue, Dec 16, 2025 at 02:30:24PM -0800, Rebecca VanRheenen wrote:
> 
> Hi Jürgen,
> 
> Thank you for the reply. We have updated the document accordingly.
> 
> All of our questions have now been addressed. Please review the document and 
> let us know if any further changes are needed or if you approve the document 
> in its current form.
>

Hi Rebecca,

this looks all good, I went through all the diffs once more. Just a
minor question (from a non-native speaker): The introduction now
reads:

*  The "ietf-inet-types" module defines data types relevant for the
   Internet Protocol suite such as types related to IP address, types
   for domain name, host name, URI, and email, and types for values
   in common protocol fields (e.g., port numbers).

Is it really 'IP address' or should it be "IP addresses' since there
are different kinds of IP addresses? For me, the singular 'IP address'
reads a bit strange but I leave it to your judgement.

Do you double check that the YANG is still valid? I have not verified
this using tools myself.

/js

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