On Tue, 2010-10-12 at 21:33 +0000, rachel a kartch wrote: > I've uploaded Ch1 of the Impress Guide for 3.2.1 to the feedback folder. > > Since this is my first shot at reviewing, I'd appreciate any feedback you may > have for *me*. I wasn't sure if I was overediting, focusing too much on word > choice/usage, were my corrections just way off the mark, etc. > > Thanks!
Rachel, IMO your editing was just exactly what was needed. You picked up lots of inconsistencies, errors and omissions, as well as improving the wording in many places. Not overediting at all. I disagree on some trivial points, but very few. For example, I prefer to use numerals rather than spelled-out numbers in most cases, on the theory that they are easier for ESL readers to follow. Heck, they are easier for *me* to follow. There is much precedent for this usage in technical docs. So, one gold star. Please carry on! I'll be accepting your edits and making some needed changes (such as a screenshot) and uploading the result today or tomorrow, I hope. Thank you again! --Jean --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For additional commands, e-mail: [email protected]
