Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-11: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Minor comments: 1) Agree with Warren that all the acronyms make it hard to read. Please check that you've spelled out all acronyms at the first occurrence in the intro accordingly, including EVPN. 2) section 3.1: Is the B flag even needed? Doesn't P=0 indicate that this is the Backup PE? 3) I would maybe move section 5 right after the intro because it provides some background on the benefits of this extension. 4) Are you sure there are no additional security consideration based on the information provided in this extension? E.g. an attacker indicates being the primary PE and thereby causes a conflict, or problems based on the indication of a small MTU by an attacker? Not sure if there is any risk or if that is covered somewhere else...? _______________________________________________ BESS mailing list BESS@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess
