Thanks a lot Ali for the updating.
Looks fine for me apart from one point.
Correct me if I am wrong for what mentioned below.
This document aims to enable capability of evpn to be used on ENNI. But
ENNI also have EVPL, ELAN and ETREE services.  This document have a
brilliant solution, but overall current document only mentions usage in
ELAN, so the question is how about ETREE and VPWS? As the solution in this
document is vES based, I believe it should work for ETREE and VPWS without
much extra considerations.  So if authors agree, I prefer to cover this in
the current document. It is also fine for me if authors' choice is out of
scope and prefer to cover other scenarios in a separate document.

By the way another nits..
Sub type in figure 6 is not consistent with description above. I got lost
on this as previous version was still 0x04.. so if 0x07 is the correct one
please fix the value in the figure
Thanks a lot.

Regards,
Tim


On Wed, 9 Jan 2019, 00:31 Mankamana Mishra (mankamis) <manka...@cisco.com
wrote:

> Thanks ali. I took look at the diff, it looks ok to me to move forward.
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> Thanks
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> Mankamana
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> *From: *BESS <bess-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of "Ali Sajassi (sajassi)"
> <saja...@cisco.com>
> *Date: *Tuesday, January 8, 2019 at 3:17 PM
> *To: *Tim <yutianpeng.i...@gmail.com>, "stephane.litkow...@orange.com" <
> stephane.litkow...@orange.com>, "bess@ietf.org" <bess@ietf.org>
> *Subject: *Re: [bess] WGLC, IPR and implementation poll for
> draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment
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> Tim, Mankamana,
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> The rev02 of the draft has the updates to address your latest comments.
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> Cheers,
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> Ali
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> *From: *BESS <bess-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of Tim <
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> *Date: *Monday, January 7, 2019 at 2:53 PM
> *To: *"stephane.litkow...@orange.com" <stephane.litkow...@orange.com>, "
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> *Subject: *Re: [bess] WGLC, IPR and implementation poll for
> draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment
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> Hi,
>
> Support this work as an individual. This document is a great and elegant
> step for EVPN towards SP network.
>
> Some small comments by the way:
>
> 1. Figure 2 shows the scope of EVPN network but the other figures in the
> document not. Please kindly update, then it is more readable.
>
> 2. There are 2 Figure 2
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> 3. Document is lack of mention on E-Tree, it should work without any extra
> consideration right?
>
> 4. Please fix format issue in section 8 and update TBD in section 9.
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> Thanks,
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> Tim
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>
>
> On 2018/12/3 18:43, stephane.litkow...@orange.com wrote:
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