Thanks,
I have fixed all what was mentioned below for the next revision.
Stephane
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Subject: Re: [bess] Erik Kline's No Objection on
draft-ietf-bess-rfc5549revision-04: (with COMMENT)
Hi Erik,
On 8/17/20, 7:32 AM, "Acee Lindem (acee)" <a...@cisco.com> wrote:
Hi Erik,
On 8/16/20, 7:50 PM, "BESS on behalf of Erik Kline via Datatracker"
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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bess-rfc5549revision-04: No Objection
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[[ comments ]]
[ section 3 ]
* Perhaps "8-octet RD is set to zero" -> "8-octet RD set to zero"
[ section 4 ]
* Perhaps "for which there is already solution" ->
"for which there is already a solution"
* "from the onset" -> "from the outset", I think
I believe either is correct and I think "onset" is more common.
I guess "onset" usually implies the start of something unpleasant, which would
hopefully not be the case for supporting next-hops of both AFs __, so I would
agree with your suggested change. Or it could simply be changed to "from the
beginning" to avoid any confusion.
https://www.differencebetween.com/difference-between-onset-and-vs-outset/
Thanks,
Acee
Thanks,
Acee
[ section 6.2 ]
* "IPV4" -> "IPv4"
[ section 6.3 ]
* "IPV4" -> "IPv4"
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