Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-08: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi, Thanks for this document. It's a bit unclear to me whether the descriptions/definitions of MIP/MEP/MA/MD are coming from CFM or RFC 6136. Section 1.1 suggests that they are coming from CFM (but without a normative reference to 802.1Q), but the terminology implies that they are being taken from RFC 6136. Certainly, there seem to be places in this document where more meaning of these terms seems to be expected than what is provided in the terminology section. Section 2.6 refers to CCMs, but I think that a reader would only understand what these are if they have read CFM. Hence, I think that this document would probably benefit from having a normative reference to 802.1Q rather than informative. Minor comments: 2.1 OAM Layering "and shows which devices have visibility into what OAM layer(s)." Perhaps indicate by the 'o' symbol. Otherwise the fact that the Link OAM is the end point of the physical links, whereas the other OAM endpoints are may cause confusion. Figure 2: - Would it be helpful to move the 'o' marks to the end of the PE devices, to line up with the Link OAM end points? - Is "Service CFM" the right term here? Does this mean "Service OAM - CFM"? - Probably helpful to add an informative reference to 802.3 Link OAM, which is in figure 2. 2.2 EVPN Service OAM - I'm not sure how clear "towards the device" is when the point is already within the device. - The up and down arrows for the MEPS ("^" and "V") seem to potentially make Figure 3 more confusing. Also "down" should be changed to "Down" in the last CE. Nits: I'm not sure why the PE nodes are numbered by CE nodes are not. Regards, Rob _______________________________________________ BESS mailing list BESS@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess