Francesca Palombini has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-bess-evpn-inter-subnet-forwarding-14: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-inter-subnet-forwarding/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for the work on this document. I have scanned the document for ART issues and found none. I only have two editorial comments. Francesca 1. ----- FP: Please expand PE, DPI, FW (which maybe should be just replaced by forwarding), TTL, RD, on first use. PE also seem to belong in the terminology section, in my opinion. 2. ----- FP: nit - s/gratutious/gratuitous _______________________________________________ BESS mailing list BESS@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess
