Hi Ketan,

Thanks for your reply.

Your proposed changes look good to me.

Thanks for this.

--Bruno

From: Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.i...@gmail.com>
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To: DECRAENE Bruno INNOV/NET <bruno.decra...@orange.com>
Cc: Matthew Bocci (Nokia) <matthew.bo...@nokia.com>; 
draft-trr-bess-bgp-srv6-a...@ietf.org; bess@ietf.org
Subject: Re: WG adoption and IPR poll for draft-trr-bess-bgp-srv6-args-02

Hi Bruno,

Thanks for your support and comments. Please check inline below for response.

On Wed, Oct 11, 2023 at 7:51 PM 
<bruno.decra...@orange.com<mailto:bruno.decra...@orange.com>> wrote:
I support adoption : clarifying spec and improving interop is important.

Thank you for section 4 regarding Backward Compatibility.
May be 1 comment although I didn’t take time to read everything in details and 
I’m not familiar with EVPN.

It’s not completely clear to me whether backward compatibility MAY be preserved 
or MUST be preserved.
Unless there is a good technical reason, my preference would be for “MUST be 
preserved”.
e.g.
§4

OLD: Backward compatibility with implementations doing the bitwise
   logical-OR operation can be preserved by the advertisement of SIDs


NEW: Backward compatibility with implementations doing the bitwise

   logical-OR operation is preserved thanks to the advertisement of SIDs


KT> Ack. We will incorporate this change in the next version.

§3.1
OLD:

it is

   REQUIRED that proper LBL, LNL, and FL values be set corresponding to

   the supported SID Structure for the End.DT2M SRv6 Service SIDs.

KT> In this context, the "proper" values are the same values as signaled via 
the SID Structure for the End.DT2M SID. Would the following work?

NEW:
it is
REQUIRED that the LBL, LNL, and FL values be set as indicated via
the SID Structure for the End.DT2M SRv6 Service SIDs.





Given that this is already the second spec to clarify this, may be “proper [..] 
value” could be expanded so as to specify the precise behavior which is 
REQUIRED.


Probably similar comment for §3.2 (“The LBL, LNL, and FL MUST be set to 
appropriate values”).

KT> Perhaps the word "appropriate" is redundant here ... would removing it help?

Thanks,
Ketan


Thanks,
Regards,
--Bruno



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[1] draft-trr-bess-bgp-srv6-args-02 - SRv6 Argument Signaling for BGP Services 
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