[email protected] wrote these words on 11/10/09 03:01 CST:
> Author: wblaszcz
>
> Log:
> Added new package. udev-145
>
> +    <para><application>Udev</application> was indeed installed in LFS and 
> there
> +    is no reason to reinstall it unless you are going to install
> +    <application>DeviceKit-power</application>. This is so that we can enable
> +    the extra features which includes <application>gudev</application>, a
> +    requirement for <application>DeviceKit-power</application>.</para>

In BLFS, "we" don't ever really do anything. The Editors create the book,
the readers read the book and use our instructions. Could you change the
above to something like "This installation of Udev enables extra features ...."


> +
> +    <segmentedlist>
> +      <segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>
> +      <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
> +      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
> +
> +      <seglistitem>
> +        <seg>udevadm, udevd, ata_id, cdrom_id, collect, 
> create_floppy_devices,
> +        edd_id, fstab_import, hid2hci, keymap, modem-modeswitch, path_id,
> +        pci-db, scsi_id, udev-acl, usb-db, usb_id, and v4l_id</seg>
> +        <seg>libudev.so and libgudev-1.0.so</seg>
> +        <seg>/etc/udev, /lib/udev/{keymaps,rules.d},
> +        /usr/{include/gudev-1.0/gudev,share/{doc/udev-145/writing_udev_rules,
> +        gtk-doc/html/{gudev,libudev}}}</seg>
> +      </seglistitem>
> +    </segmentedlist>

You should probably only list the items that this installation of Udev
provides and say the rest is installed in LFS. See the BLFS Shadow and GCC
installation instructions for examples.


> Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/acl.xml
> ===================================================================
> --- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/acl.xml       2009-11-08 16:44:31 UTC (rev 
> 8127)
> +++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/acl.xml       2009-11-10 09:01:13 UTC (rev 
> 8128)
> @@ -87,7 +87,9 @@
>  <screen role="root"><userinput>make install install-dev install-lib 
> &amp;&amp;
>  mv /usr/share/doc/acl /usr/share/doc/acl-&acl-version;</userinput></screen>
>  
> -    <para>You should now re-install <application>Coreutils</application> and 
> proceed to run the test suite.</para>
> +    <para>You should now re-install <application><ulink
> +    
> url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/view/stable/chapter06/coreutils.html";>Coreutils</ulink>
> +    </application> and proceed to run the test suite.</para>

There is an entity in general.ent for the LFS Book that is based on the
BLFS book (mirror) the reader might be using. Let's use that instead of
hard-coding www.linuxfromscratch.org.

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