Hi Barbara.
Response inline.
On 11/10/08 17:04, Barbara.Lundquist at Sun.COM wrote:
> Jack, I've made these edits in my master copies. Please see my added
> comments below. There's
> a few responses worth noting.
<snip>
>
>
>> Note: it may be clearer to the reader to put how to use ManifestRead in
>> a different section, and refer to that section from here. Then you can
>> just state that the first arg is just the server socket file name and it
>> is used with the ManifestReader, and see section xxx on how to use the
>> ManifestReader.
>>
>> If you do this, you can put the key/value pair section (starts on page
>> 14) there with it.
>>
> I'm unclear on this piece, so will leave as is for now
This comment pertained to the table on page 13. I was suggesting to
reduce the "Server socket file name" description to something like this:
The first argument is the manifest reader socket. This argument
specifies the
socket that is used with /usr/bin/ManifestRead for accessing the
manifest data.
Please see section xxx on how to use the ManifestReader.
and then have a different section dedicated to the ManifestReader which
takes the rest of the text (the remainder of the "Server socket file
name" description in table 2.2) plus the stuff in the key/value pair
section.
Does this make more sense?
Thanks,
Jack
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