Clay,
Thank you! I've made these edits to my master copy of the AI document.
Barbara


-------- Original Message --------
Subject:        Re: [caiman-discuss] Final (?) AI docs posted
Date:   Wed, 12 Nov 2008 16:58:27 -0700 (MST)
From:   Clay Baenziger <[email protected]>
To:     Barbara Lundquist <Barbara.Lundquist at Sun.COM>
CC:     Sundar Yamunachari <sundar.yamunachari at Sun.COM>, Sue Sohn 
<Susan.Sohn at Sun.COM>, caiman-discuss at opensolaris.org
References:     <491A35DC.9070204 at Sun.COM>



Hi Barbara,
        The doc looks very good, but on page 20 I see a few things:
the statement: "Use the following criteria manifest file to replace
default.xml with sc_manifest1.xml." isn't quite accurate. Perhaps:
"Use the following criteria manifest file to replace the current
default manifest with default.xml and sc_manifest1.xml."

Otherwise, in the criteria manifest example just below that statement the
line:
<sc_manifest_file name="SSH" URI="./sc_manifest1.xml"/>
should be
<sc_manifest_file name="AI" URI="./sc_manifest1.xml"/>

                                                Thank you,
                                                Clay

On Tue, 11 Nov 2008 Barbara.Lundquist at Sun.COM wrote:

> Sundar and Sue,
>
> Thanks for your edits and new material!
> What I hope are the final AI docs are now posted at:
>
> AI Article:
> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/AIinstallFinal.pdf
>
> installadm(1M) man page:
> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/installadm.1m.txt
>
> I could do abit more tweaking tomorrow/Thursday, but I need
> to spend most of tomorrow finishing the DC docs.
>
> I'll deliver these docs by 1st thing Friday morning.
> Barbara
>
>
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