Thanks for the fixes Barbara; thanks for the rewording Sue otherwise makes
that much more readable.
Thank you,
Clay
On Thu, 13 Nov 2008, Barbara.Lundquist at Sun.COM wrote:
> Clay,
> Thank you! I've made these edits to my master copy of the AI document.
> Barbara
>
>
> -------- Original Message --------
> Subject: Re: [caiman-discuss] Final (?) AI docs posted
> Date: Wed, 12 Nov 2008 16:58:27 -0700 (MST)
> From: Clay Baenziger <clayb at sun.com>
> To: Barbara Lundquist <Barbara.Lundquist at Sun.COM>
> CC: Sundar Yamunachari <sundar.yamunachari at Sun.COM>, Sue Sohn
> <Susan.Sohn at Sun.COM>, caiman-discuss at opensolaris.org
> References: <491A35DC.9070204 at Sun.COM>
>
>
>
> Hi Barbara,
> The doc looks very good, but on page 20 I see a few things:
> the statement: "Use the following criteria manifest file to replace
> default.xml with sc_manifest1.xml." isn't quite accurate. Perhaps:
> "Use the following criteria manifest file to replace the current
> default manifest with default.xml and sc_manifest1.xml."
>
> Otherwise, in the criteria manifest example just below that statement the
> line:
> <sc_manifest_file name="SSH" URI="./sc_manifest1.xml"/>
> should be
> <sc_manifest_file name="AI" URI="./sc_manifest1.xml"/>
>
> Thank you,
> Clay
>
> On Tue, 11 Nov 2008 Barbara.Lundquist at Sun.COM wrote:
>
>> Sundar and Sue,
>>
>> Thanks for your edits and new material!
>> What I hope are the final AI docs are now posted at:
>>
>> AI Article:
>> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/AIinstallFinal.pdf
>>
>> installadm(1M) man page:
>> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/installadm.1m.txt
>>
>> I could do abit more tweaking tomorrow/Thursday, but I need
>> to spend most of tomorrow finishing the DC docs.
>>
>> I'll deliver these docs by 1st thing Friday morning.
>> Barbara
>>
>>
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