On 02/ 3/10 07:19 PM, Karen Tung wrote:
> Hi,
>
> I would like to get at least 2 reviewers to look at changes for
> the following 2010.03 stopper.
>
> 5209 <http://defect.opensolaris.org/bz/show_bug.cgi?id=5209>
> Enhancements to the mkrepo script
> http://defect.opensolaris.org/bz/show_bug.cgi?id=5209
>
> webrev:
>
> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~ktung/5209/
>

Mostly looks good, comments below.

ai_sparc_image.xml

153: "in the order listed"

(likewise for 170 in ai_x86_image.xml, 172 in all_lang_slim_cd_x86.xml, 
171 in slim_cd_x86.xml)

slimcd_live.xml

26: s/Slim//

34, 125, 170: a comment about the timeout change reason would be nice

really, we need more comments in all of the install-specific profiles, 
anyway

boot_archive_configure

generally, the changes here are stylistically inconsistent in referring 
to variables; I'm also not sure they're consistent with the preferred 
coding style for ksh scripts, though I believe we have a general bug 
about that in the finalizer scripts.  It would be nice to not make it 
worse, though.

238: you've got a potential corner case here in that we require using 
the build area's DTD for the manipulations here, but the code allows for 
reference to the build system's profiles.  I'd suggest that the DTD 
reference should be rooted to be consistent with each profile that's 
applied.

252: line seems unnecessary

263: I would expect that this kind of failure results in a failure of 
the build.  Why should we just continue?

generic_live.xml

26: perhaps should say "Base service profile customized..."

69, 83: why not put these under the group starting at 168, since that 
comment applies to these two?

mkrepo

I hope we're certain that this will be removed post-EMI integration, 
otherwise this file really could use a comment noting that it is an 
adaptation of manifest-import and changes to manifest-import should be 
evaluated for their applicability here.

media-fs-root, 181: A comment on why this is the right point to do this 
would be a good idea.  Smae goes for net-fs-root line 331.

Dave

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