Hi Nirmal-

Here's some feedback....
Thanks!
/jb


ai_get_manifest.py

line 381:
        Nit - cmd_op sounds a bit like an opcode or something, maybe just use 
"output" or similar? Also, that could be my background, which is why it's a nit 
- feel free to ignore if you want :)

line 384:
        Nit - You could use splitlines() rather than split"\n")

line 385:
        If something goes wrong here wrt the output, or if the format changes 
and you for whatever reason find yourself with a line without a ":" or with at 
least the right number of elements (in this case, three), this will dump a 
stack. Maybe put it in a try/except ValueError. Or, possibly just validate the 
string?

line 426, 467:
        Same comment as with 385

line 509:
        nit - There are likely cleaner ways to do this. Given we have about 8 
different places in the code where we get a netmask, it might be a good idea to 
see if we can put this in one place and call it. Maybe a low-priority CR for 
this would be good?



installadm-common.sh

line 893:
        looks like maybe an indent problem here?




On Apr 5, 2012, at 11:05 AM, Nirmal Agarwal wrote:

> Hi all
> 
> A gentle  reminder,  I would appreciate if someone can review this fix.
> 
> 
> Thanks
> Nirmal
> 
> 
> On 4/3/2012 5:28 PM, Nirmal Agarwal wrote:
>> Hi all
>> 
>> Can I please get a code review for CR 6996539.
>> 
>> 6996539 Convert AI to use ipadm instead of ifconfig
>> 
>> 
>> Webrev :
>> https://cr.opensolaris.org/action/browse/caiman/nirmal27/6996539/webrev/
>> 
>> I have removed get_ip_netmask() and find_network_nmask() from
>> installadm-common.sh. I couldn't find reference to them in the gate.
>> Let me know if I missed something.
>> 
>> Pep8 is clean and pylint output is unchanged.
>> 
>> Testing :
>> 
>> -> Created custom image and tested client boots and sets the
>>   criteria correctly.
>> 
>> --> installed the installadm packages from nightly and created
>>    a service.
>> 
>> Let me know if I need to run some other tests.
>> 
>> Thanks
>> Nirmal
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