Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-capport-architecture/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I found this document easy to read, but have a few comments. I support the 3rd bullet of Ben's discuss. I was surprised by the diagram in section 2.6, since it seems to imply that the Provisioning Service kicks everything off, but I would have expected the User equipment to initiate the flow, which is articulated in the first step of section 4.1. Hence, I think that the diagram could be more clear if it also showed the initial request from the client (as per the first step in 4.1). Finally, I note that this document makes no mention of OAM considerations. Having some text covering these aspects would probably be beneficial. _______________________________________________ Captive-portals mailing list Captive-portals@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/captive-portals
