Overall, it is a nice, clean corporate site. I found the default font size to be a bit too small, personally. It looks more like text and less like words if that makes sense. I just see blocks of text, not individual words that jump out at me to read them.
On the home page, I think that the contrast of the text over the grey background is too low. It doesn't really "pop". The text, in general, could use a bit more line spacing I think to reduce the perceived density, especially on pages with a lot of words. It should be FAQs, not FAQ's, it is plural, not possessive. The navigation bar is nice on its own but when combined with the red/blue/white of the logo on the masthead, it really looks just like my Costco card. That might be fine, but just telling you what it makes me think of. A really pretty nice, clean design. The main issues that jump out at me is that the major visual elements (the masthead, the photos, etc) are very high contrast but the text isn't, so it encourages me to glance over the pages and look at the pretty things but not actually read the content. If you can increase the contrast in the content and perhaps space it out a bit more, it might encourage more visual interaction with the text. Cheers, Judah I agree with Jerry about the paper clip, that's a really nice visual element and could be used for a lot of things. On Thu, Jan 7, 2010 at 12:19 PM, Medic <hofme...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Weegs started a trend here. I'd love a bit o' feedback as well. > This hasn't been one of my most exciting projects. > > http://tinyurl.com/ylnmq3q > <http://www.remaxevents.com/> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~| Want to reach the ColdFusion community with something they want? Let them know on the House of Fusion mailing lists Archive: http://www.houseoffusion.com/groups/cf-community/message.cfm/messageid:310114 Subscription: http://www.houseoffusion.com/groups/cf-community/subscribe.cfm Unsubscribe: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/unsubscribe.cfm?user=11502.10531.5
