rjmccall added inline comments.

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Comment at: clang/docs/AutomaticReferenceCounting.rst:1748
+``objc_externally_retained`` can apply to local variables, or to parameters via
+a function definitions.
+
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I think "can apply to parameters and local variables" is probably the clearest 
way to express this.

I would suggest turning this around a bit.  Don't name the section after the 
attribute; instead,
start by talking about externally-retained variables as a general concept, then 
begin a new
paragraph to discuss how they arise: (1) certain implicit places which will be 
discussed below
and (2) this attribute, which you can then discuss.  It will then be natural to 
add a third
paragraph to talk about the pragma or whatever it ends up being.

The first paragraph should talk about things like capture semantics like the 
attribute docs do.


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Comment at: clang/include/clang/Basic/AttrDocs.td:3811
+will be retained as part of capturing it and released when the block is
+destroyed. It also affects C++ features such as lambda capture, ``decltype``,
+and template argument deduction.
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Worth adding after this sentence: "(Note that the block capture field is not 
considered
externally retained.)"


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