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docs/en-US/sys-offering-sysvm.xml <https://reviews.apache.org/r/8698/#comment32939> Creating a New System Service Offering should be <xref linkend="creating-system-service-offerings"/> docs/en-US/sys-offering-sysvm.xml <https://reviews.apache.org/r/8698/#comment32937> Suggest to phrase this as "Start MySQL." Either way, I think it should be MySQL, not MSSQL. docs/en-US/sys-offering-sysvm.xml <https://reviews.apache.org/r/8698/#comment32938> Could just say "Restart the Management Server." Otherwise, replace CloudStack with &PRODUCT; - Jessica Tomechak On Dec. 20, 2012, 6:08 a.m., Radhika PC wrote: > > ----------------------------------------------------------- > This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit: > https://reviews.apache.org/r/8698/ > ----------------------------------------------------------- > > (Updated Dec. 20, 2012, 6:08 a.m.) > > > Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, > and Joe Brockmeier. > > > Description > ------- > > doc for Document procedure to choose default System Offering for System VMs > > > Diffs > ----- > > docs/en-US/offerings.xml 10252fd > docs/en-US/sys-offering-sysvm.xml PRE-CREATION > > Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/8698/diff/ > > > Testing > ------- > > Build cleanly. > > publican build --format=html --langs=en-US --config publican-installation.cfg > publican build --format=html --langs=en-US --config publican-adminguide.cfg > > Patch applies. > > > Thanks, > > Radhika PC > >
