shannon 2002/06/06 10:35:45 Modified: src/documentation/xdocs index.xml Log: Minor edits. Could someone please consider the fixme comment I added which proposes revised language for the last sentence of the second paragraph? Revision Changes Path 1.10 +17 -11 xml-cocoon2/src/documentation/xdocs/index.xml Index: index.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/cvs/xml-cocoon2/src/documentation/xdocs/index.xml,v retrieving revision 1.9 retrieving revision 1.10 diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10 --- index.xml 24 May 2002 13:06:18 -0000 1.9 +++ index.xml 6 Jun 2002 17:35:45 -0000 1.10 @@ -11,33 +11,39 @@ </header> <body> <figure src="images/cocoon.gif" alt="Cocoon"/> - <s1 title="What is this?"> + <s1 title="What is Cocoon?"> <p> Apache Cocoon is an XML publishing framework that raises the usage of XML and XSLT technologies for server applications to a new level. Designed for performance and scalability around pipelined SAX - processing, Cocoon offers a flexible environment based on the separation - of concerns between content, logic and style. A centralized - configuration system and sophisticated caching top this all off and help - you to create, deploy and maintain rock-solid XML server applications. + processing, Cocoon offers a flexible environment based on a separation + of concerns between content, logic, and style. To top this all off, + Cocoon's centralized configuration system and sophisticated caching help + you to create, deploy, and maintain rock-solid XML server applications. </p> <p> - Cocoon interacts with most data sources, including: filesystems, RDBMS, + Cocoon interacts with most data sources, including filesystems, RDBMS, LDAP, native XML databases, and network-based data sources. It adapts content delivery to the capabilities of different devices like HTML, WML, - PDF, SVG, RTF just to name a few. Cocoon currently runs as a Servlet or - from a powerful commandline interface. The chosen design of an abstracted + PDF, SVG, and RTF, to name just a few. You can run Cocoon as a Servlet as well as + through a powerful, commandline interface. The chosen design of an abstracted environment gives you the freedom to implement your own concrete environment to suit your required functionality. </p> + <fixme author="DS"> + The last sentence remains awkward. Is it correct to write as follows: + The deliberate design of its abstract environment gives you the freedom to + implement the functionality you need within your own custom, concrete environment. + </fixme> + </s1> - <s1 title="Where is it?"> + <s1 title="Where can I find it?"> <p> - If you want to download the latest release @released.version@ of Apache Cocoon just go to the + To download the latest release @released.version@ of Apache Cocoon, go to the <link href="http://xml.apache.org/cocoon/dist/">download area.</link> </p> <p> - If you are looking for the past generation of Cocoon (not supported anymore but still available) + If you are looking for a past generation of Cocoon (no longer supported but still available), go to the <link href="http://xml.apache.org/cocoon1/">Cocoon 1.x area</link>. </p> </s1>
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