shannon 2002/06/15 10:04:14
Modified: src/documentation/xdocs index.xml
Log:
Removed fixme and revised last
sentence of para 2, based on
Stefano's feedback.
Revision Changes Path
1.11 +4 -11 xml-cocoon2/src/documentation/xdocs/index.xml
Index: index.xml
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RCS file: /home/cvs/xml-cocoon2/src/documentation/xdocs/index.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
--- index.xml 6 Jun 2002 17:35:45 -0000 1.10
+++ index.xml 15 Jun 2002 17:04:14 -0000 1.11
@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<?xml-stylesheet type="text/css" href="css/document.css"?>
<!DOCTYPE document PUBLIC "-//APACHE//DTD Documentation V1.0//EN"
"dtd/document-v10.dtd">
<document>
<header>
@@ -26,16 +25,10 @@
LDAP, native XML databases, and network-based data sources. It adapts
content delivery to the capabilities of different devices like HTML, WML,
PDF, SVG, and RTF, to name just a few. You can run Cocoon as a Servlet as well as
- through a powerful, commandline interface. The chosen design of an abstracted
- environment gives you the freedom to implement your own concrete
- environment to suit your required functionality.
- </p>
- <fixme author="DS">
- The last sentence remains awkward. Is it correct to write as follows:
- The deliberate design of its abstract environment gives you the freedom to
- implement the functionality you need within your own custom, concrete environment.
- </fixme>
-
+ through a powerful, commandline interface. The deliberate design of its abstract
+ environment gives you the freedom to extend its functionality to meet your
+ special needs in a highly modular fashion.
+ </p>
</s1>
<s1 title="Where can I find it?">
<p>
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