Author: bayard Date: Mon Mar 29 03:29:26 2010 New Revision: 928582 URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=928582&view=rev Log: Cutting some of the text. Feedback section unnecessary. Keeping the focus on the novice reader not legal bureaucracy (components who differ must document statement)
Modified: commons/proper/commons-site/trunk/src/site/xdoc/releases/index.xml Modified: commons/proper/commons-site/trunk/src/site/xdoc/releases/index.xml URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/commons/proper/commons-site/trunk/src/site/xdoc/releases/index.xml?rev=928582&r1=928581&r2=928582&view=diff ============================================================================== --- commons/proper/commons-site/trunk/src/site/xdoc/releases/index.xml (original) +++ commons/proper/commons-site/trunk/src/site/xdoc/releases/index.xml Mon Mar 29 03:29:26 2010 @@ -28,15 +28,13 @@ <subsection name='Introduction'> <p> The <em>Apache Commons</em> project differs from many other Apache projects because - it is comprised of multiple, independently released components. Therefore, the release procedure - for an individual component needs to be documented so that component authors follow consistent - practices. + it is comprised of multiple, independently released components. The common release procedure + for an individual component is documented here so that contributors can easily move from + component to component. </p> <p> - Individual components (such as Collections) might vary from these practices - but these steps should prove sufficient for the majority - of cases. Any components which deviate substantially from this procedure should document these - deviations. + Individual components may vary from these practices, but these steps should prove sufficient for the majority + of cases. </p> </subsection> <subsection name='Documentation'> @@ -50,14 +48,5 @@ </p> </subsection> </section> - <section name='Feedback'> - <p> - Feedback - yes please! - </p> - <p> - Comments, critiques and error reports - - post them any and all to the dev mailing list at commons.apache.org. Please prefix with [doc]. - </p> - </section> </body> </document>