ektravel commented on code in PR #16826:
URL: https://github.com/apache/druid/pull/16826#discussion_r1702383692


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docs/querying/sql-scalar.md:
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@@ -79,50 +79,50 @@ to FLOAT. At runtime, Druid will widen 32-bit floats to 
64-bit for most expressi
 |`BITWISE_SHIFT_RIGHT(expr1, expr2)`|Returns the result of `expr1 >> expr2`. 
Double values will be implicitly cast to longs, use 
`BITWISE_CONVERT_DOUBLE_TO_LONG_BITS` to perform bitwise operations directly 
with doubles.|
 |`BITWISE_XOR(expr1, expr2)`|Returns the result of `expr1 ^ expr2`. Double 
values will be implicitly cast to longs, use 
`BITWISE_CONVERT_DOUBLE_TO_LONG_BITS` to perform bitwise operations directly 
with doubles.|
 |`DIV(x, y)`|Returns the result of integer division of x by y |
-|`HUMAN_READABLE_BINARY_BYTE_FORMAT(value, [precision])`| Format a number in 
human-readable [IEC](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Binary_prefix) format. For 
example, HUMAN_READABLE_BINARY_BYTE_FORMAT(1048576) returns `1.00 MiB`. 
`precision` must be in the range of `[0, 3]` (default: 2). |
-|`HUMAN_READABLE_DECIMAL_BYTE_FORMAT(value, [precision])`| Format a number in 
human-readable [SI](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Binary_prefix) format. 
HUMAN_READABLE_DECIMAL_BYTE_FORMAT(1048576) returns `1.04 MB`. `precision` must 
be in the range of `[0, 3]` (default: 2). `precision` must be in the range of 
`[0, 3]` (default: 2). |
-|`HUMAN_READABLE_DECIMAL_FORMAT(value, [precision])`| Format a number in 
human-readable SI format. For example, HUMAN_READABLE_DECIMAL_FORMAT(1048576) 
returns `1.04 M`. `precision` must be in the range of `[0, 3]` (default: 2). |
+|`HUMAN_READABLE_BINARY_BYTE_FORMAT(value[, precision])`| Format a number in 
human-readable [IEC](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Binary_prefix) format. For 
example, HUMAN_READABLE_BINARY_BYTE_FORMAT(1048576) returns `1.00 MiB`. 
`precision` must be in the range of `[0, 3]` (default: 2). |
+|`HUMAN_READABLE_DECIMAL_BYTE_FORMAT(value[, precision])`| Format a number in 
human-readable [SI](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Binary_prefix) format. 
HUMAN_READABLE_DECIMAL_BYTE_FORMAT(1048576) returns `1.04 MB`. `precision` must 
be in the range of `[0, 3]` (default: 2). `precision` must be in the range of 
`[0, 3]` (default: 2). |
+|`HUMAN_READABLE_DECIMAL_FORMAT(value[, precision])`| Format a number in 
human-readable SI format. For example, HUMAN_READABLE_DECIMAL_FORMAT(1048576) 
returns `1.04 M`. `precision` must be in the range of `[0, 3]` (default: 2). |
 |`SAFE_DIVIDE(x, y)`|Returns the division of x by y guarded on division by 0. 
In case y is 0 it returns 0, or `null` if 
`druid.generic.useDefaultValueForNull=false` |
 
 
 ## String functions
 
-String functions accept strings, and return a type appropriate to the function.
+String functions accept strings and return a type appropriate to the function.
 
 |Function|Notes|
 |--------|-----|
-|`CONCAT(expr, expr...)`|Concats a list of expressions. Also see the 
[concatenation operator](sql-operators.md#concatenation-operator).|
-|`TEXTCAT(expr, expr)`|Two argument version of `CONCAT`.|
+|`CONCAT(expr[, expr, ...])`|Concatenates a list of expressions. Also see the 
[concatenation operator](sql-operators.md#concatenation-operator).|
+|`TEXTCAT(expr, expr)`|Concatenates two expressions.|
 |`CONTAINS_STRING(expr, str)`|Returns true if the `str` is a substring of 
`expr`.|
 |`ICONTAINS_STRING(expr, str)`|Returns true if the `str` is a substring of 
`expr`. The match is case-insensitive.|
 |`DECODE_BASE64_UTF8(expr)`|Decodes a Base64-encoded string into a UTF-8 
encoded string.|
-|`LEFT(expr, [length])`|Returns the leftmost length characters from `expr`.|
-|`RIGHT(expr, [length])`|Returns the rightmost length characters from `expr`.|
+|`LEFT(expr, N)`|Returns the `N` leftmost characters from `expr`, where `N` is 
an integer. |
+|`RIGHT(expr, N)`|Returns the `N` rightmost characters from `expr`, where `N` 
is an integer. |
 |`LENGTH(expr)`|Length of `expr` in UTF-16 code units.|
 |`CHAR_LENGTH(expr)`|Alias for `LENGTH`.|
 |`CHARACTER_LENGTH(expr)`|Alias for `LENGTH`.|
 |`STRLEN(expr)`|Alias for `LENGTH`.|
-|`LOOKUP(expr, lookupName, [replaceMissingValueWith])`|Look up `expr` in a 
registered [query-time lookup table](lookups.md) named `lookupName`. The 
optional constant `replaceMissingValueWith`, if provided, is returned when the 
`expr` is null or when the lookup does not contain a value for `expr`.<br /><br 
/>Lookups can also be queried directly using the [`lookup` 
schema](sql.md#from).|
+|`LOOKUP(expr, lookupName[, replaceMissingValueWith])`|Look up `expr` in a 
registered [query-time lookup table](lookups.md) named `lookupName`. The 
optional constant `replaceMissingValueWith`, if provided, is returned when the 
`expr` is null or when the lookup does not contain a value for `expr`.<br /><br 
/>Lookups can also be queried directly using the [`lookup` 
schema](sql.md#from).|

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   |`LOOKUP(expr, lookupName[, replaceMissingValueWith])`|Look up `expr` in a 
registered [query-time lookup table](lookups.md) named `lookupName`. If 
provided, the optional constant `replaceMissingValueWith` is returned when the 
`expr` is null or when the lookup does not contain a value for `expr`.<br /><br 
/>You can query lookups directly using the [`lookup` schema](sql.md#from).|
   ```
   Is there a different verb we can use to describe this function? The first 
sentence is hard to read/comprehend: "Look up `expr` in a registered query-time 
lookup table named `lookupName`."



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