Well said, Morris.
Noelle Morris wrote:
Actually, most of your corrections are unnecessary. While "Actually"
should not be used, most of his constructions are good idiomatic
English. It might be better stated as one sentence:
"I am from Hingoli, a district in Maharashtra state, but at present I
am in Pune working as a software developer at Persistent Systems Pvt.
Ltd."
On 11/7/05, *Raj Gupta* <[EMAIL PROTECTED]
<mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]>> wrote:
(No need for actually) I am from Hingoli, which is a district in
Maharashtra state. Whereas presently I am working in pune as
software developer at persistent systems pvt. ltd.
:-- Suggestion from group. please look on way of writing and tell
any other rectification can be done in it.
On 11/7/05, *Ashish choudhari* <[EMAIL PROTECTED]
<mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]>> wrote:
Actually I am from Hingoli, a district in Maharashtra state.
But at
present i am in Pune doing a job of software developer at
persistent
systems pvt. ltd.