Could you help me to correct the following writting? Thanks in advance.
What you said quite right, the future is in my hand, and I should look
into this matter seriously and carefully. But I don't want to leave
here until after some time; how long I will stay here I don't know.
That depends on.
And besides, changing job is a troublesome thing to do. For
relationship with colleagues, I treated them as the formal
relationship. I have never scold at them, never offend them. but I
don't believe them, I don't want to approach them, neither let them
to approach my deep heart. Keeping one's secret is necessary. I
don't know what they think of me. Once your weaknesses are release to
them, some of them will use this as a means and tell all of them to the
boss, and it is hateful.
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Could you help me to correct the following writting? Thanks in advance.
What you said quite right, the future is in my hand, and I should look
into this matter seriously and carefully. But I don't want to leave
here until after some time; how long I will stay here I don't know.
That depends on.
And besides, changing job is a troublesome thing to do. For
relationship with colleagues, I treated them as the formal
relationship. I have never scold at them, never offend them. but I
don't believe them, I don't want to approach them, neither let them
to approach my deep heart. Keeping one's secret is necessary. I
don't know what they think of me. Once your weaknesses are release to
them, some of them will use this as a means and tell all of them to the
boss, and it is hateful.
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