On 4/8/07, lucky <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
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> In earlier days, woman's position had not been at higher level when it
> had compared with the level of men in society. However, some attempts
> by great woman in their achievements had turned into greatest records.
> In addition, this inspired other woman enormously. Therefore, this has
> resulted in an improvement in the position of feminine, and they begin
> to stand equally with men.
>                        However, it has never been thought that woman's
> success can have
> strong impact on their children. Besides, children got extensive
> liberty to do bad sorts of work as though robbery, simply roaming on
> roads with no aim, smoking and consumption of liquor has found to be
> as normal. Children's minds are very sensitive, which attracts
> negative thing extremely soon. Also, sometimes children gather to make
> a small group, particularly to plan how to perpetrate other dangerous
> crimes. These things merely transform their brains and will certainly
> have negative impact on their future. Though parents are cognizant of
> these issues due to their involvement in hectic scheduled jobs.
>                        Furthermore, these problems have been found mostly
> in small
> families, because they are no other guardians to look after their
> children when parents are at work. When compared with large families
> there are maximum possibilities of not occurring these kinds of
> problems. The major cause is, undoubtedly there will be someone elder
> in the family to look after at every issue especially security to
> their homes and to their children.
>                        Likewise, woman being as unemployed can ease these
> problems at
> higher extent. Alternatively, poor families face other problems like
> poverty. Woman in poor families are working unwilling, but it (is)
> necessary these days to run their homes and other responsibilities
> efficiently. Though these problems can be solved by doing things like
> making their children to be engaged in studies and other sportive
> activities until their jobs are finished. Later they can spend their
> time with children at evening. Thus, these sorts of ways can ease
> juvenile delinquency.
>
> good job : )
> >
>

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